SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@ellette-giselle

 I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all.

I feel you. I look back at some of my old work and I’m like “I wrote this??? Sheesh, this is terrible!”

But then sometimes I look back at my old work and I’m like “With a little reworking, this c…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Rory slid back, but his eyes were locked on Leo’s hands in a half memorized, half terrified stare. There was a very bad memory at the edge of his mind, and he didn’t know what it was, but he really didn’t want it let out.

@linus-smallprint

I know. *sobs*

Okay, sounds good. Maybe next week?

*sighs* some of this feedback is depressing. I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all. Are they even worth trying to rewrite? Rewriting is so hard….. is the message and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yikes! Bad Smaug!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

I suppose you could start earlier.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!!

aw, thanks for making me laugh. Smaug the laptop ate two years of historical research and I’m so not happy.

I’ll look at this right away!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

@ellette-giselle

https://1drv.ms/w/c/bcdce8f567320b25/ETDxCG51PcpJg0VV9oF5LxAB-hfZiwM2BGSvsV_bbcIq3w?e=sauIgi

That’s a messy looking link, that is. You should click on it. It might contains some Book feedback!!

Hopefully, Microsoft Word is still acceptable.

I didn’t get around to rereading the book this time. But this is what my thoughts…[Read more]

@koshka

leaving the kid anywhere didn’t seem…wise. He had a back for getting into pickles.

Love that!

Rory

Rory winced slightly at the list Leo had rattled off. He’d used just about every one of those things. And the memories that accompanied the usage were bad. Very bad.

“Looks like we’ve got most of this. Ready for a blowtorch?” Leo asked…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon General science

@elishavet-pidyon

Yeah, Hugo ran back to our group

@everyone

I want to update Marcel/Mateo/Celarent in a bit, but I am at a Southeast-wide presbytery meeting, and right now, my only purpose in life is to refill food and water pitchers for everybody. It’s worth it. XD But due to my responsibilities, please wait for me to proceed.

@ellette-giselle

Yes actual killing please.

lol no I’m actually serious. This isn’t the rp for that.

@elishavet-pidyon Yeah Hugo caught back up with them. He was only gone for like a minute. I’m not sure what to write for that group rn, sorry.

@koshka

Rory

Rory’s eyebrows went up. “You build bombs?”

He dropped to his knees beside Leo and instantly recoiled with a stifled gasp of pain. He quickly shifted to a sitting position, absently rubbing his injured knee. Something sharp pricked his other hand and he held up a thin shard. “I found another.”

@whalekeeper

Yeah. Plus, Martha would be more comfortable if she wasn’t alone with a bunch of guys. It would be better if Eric was awake, but since he’s not, she’s glad Sara is there.

@koshka

Rory

Rory stared at him. “Is it kind of like tactics? You know, attack plans. The officers organize all the troops so that they can effortlessly wipe out the target.” He paused and chewed on his lower lip. “Maybe not…”

@koshka

You could read his story if you wanted. You never replied after the last chapter I sent.

But you might not like it.

Rory

Rory blinked at the shattered pieces. “Jigsaw puzzle?”

He clenched and unclenched his gloved hands. He was still getting over the water incident. Leo acted like it was all normal, but Rory had never seen anything…[Read more]

@koshka

Ah yes! I would love to see his tactics! Rory is going to pick up so many bad, (possibly useful) habits.

Yeah… well he’s still been through worse. Maybe not physically at this point in his life, but he’s in a far better situation than he was, busted up or not. And as for later…….. this is gentle compared.

@koshka

Then write it!!!!!

WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!

And I won’t stop chanting until you send me a section.

Must read!

@koshka

No! Really? I RPed weeks ago. Does that mean….. KP ATE MY POST!!!! *sobbing brokenly*

sure, whatever works for you!

Well, someone had better stop Mateo, and I really don’t want Leo to die.

Rory is fine. He’s had far worse.

If I can, I will post my drawings today. I just have the 1 hour one left to do

@koshka

Yes!!! He 100% does!

You must write the book! I must read! *sob*