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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay great!!!
I guess some of both? Like what the Andromedans would call Him, as well as new names for what the humans could call Him?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Have you heard Wait For You, or HQME, or LOML? Elias is soooo sad it almost made me cry!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you soooo much!!! <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Those are all sooooo good!!!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh noooo!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@anyone-who-wishes-to-read
Chapter 7
Rage
Pain.
A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.
On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.
Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.
Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
you want an em dash instead of a hyphen
Noted. Thank you!!!
Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?
She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Sef
“You’re like my mom.”
She caught Chase staring, and giggled.
“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”
She stroked the bird with her finger again.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 9 months ago
REALLY?!?!
YESSSSSS LET’S GO!!!!
What are your favorites???-
Hmm… *contemplates for way too long*
P31, I Am, Calling, You Were There, and Like Me, I think.-
Those are all sooooo good!!!!!!!!
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Have you heard Wait For You, or HQME, or LOML? Elias is soooo sad it almost made me cry!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.
I really liked it so I put it into the “scene recycling bin” if I need it again, but for now it’s not in the draft.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 10 months ago
You’re writing’s NOT awful! I’ve always admired you and your style and passion for it!
And don’t put pressure on yourself to be perfect.
Also remember your identity is in Christ, and He gives you the gift of writing! When I get stuck, I pray about it, and then the words and plot just come to me.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 10 months ago
DON’T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 10 months ago
Ohhh haha
It’s okay cuz my WIP doesn’t make any sense either…I’ve been there and I know how stressful that is XD XD-
DON’T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 10 months ago
WHAT YOU WERE GOING TO LEAVE?!?! huh girl whattttt?
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Temporarily, not like forever. I just had a bit of a realization that my WIP makes no sense, and I got really stressed out. So, I was going to take a break for like a month or so, but then I got over it. It was nothing
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Ohhh haha
It’s okay cuz my WIP doesn’t make any sense either…I’ve been there and I know how stressful that is XD XD-
DON’T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@everyone
Sixth Chapter!!!
Chapter 6
A Voice
Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.
Sef stood on the hilltop, overlooking the city, taking in the sights and smells as if she were starving, though she knew she’d never be able to partake in the beauty of it all.
Paynes w…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I honestly don’t know XD
Here’s the link you can use (but there’s not a lot of “new chapters”…and the first couple “new” chapters need a lot of redoing, but you can read ahead if you want! Just keep in mind that if you critique them, I’ve seen a lot of the problems already. The new chapters I’m talking about are…[Read more]
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Have you heard Wait For You, or HQME, or LOML? Elias is soooo sad it almost made me cry!!!!