@savannah_grace2009
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 3 hours ago
@everyone
What do you guys think of this scene….
It’s kind of messy but it’s also supposed to be that way, like it’s a flashback…I’m trying to make it a little confusing, but not too much.
When Nami dared to open her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief.
The men were gone.
Tigin had screamed at her, threatening her with matches and a…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 3 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 days, 3 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
I’m 15
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 1 hour ago
Perfect! Thank you!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 5 days, 3 hours ago
slayyyy XDXD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 3 hours ago
You got this girl XDXD <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 4 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 4 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 19 hours ago
guess my age ✨✨🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 19 hours ago
yeahhh 🥹🥹
I edited her a little so that she’s half Azer, half Aquino.
im playing around with her a little…
so like, normally pure races don’t mix. For example, if a pure Pitt and a pure azer have kids, the child will either be pure Pitt or pure Azer.
ottoline is half Aquino, half Azer, because she had a rare genet…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 20 hours ago
Here’s a scene I just wrote
TRIGGER WARNING–it’s a little dark…
And it’s kind of not supposed to make sense since it’s a flashback XD btw so if it’s confusing, that’s why.
“Ssstand up, girl,” Tigin held his whip high. Ottoline curled into herself, trembling on the cold floor.
She knew what was going to happen next.
There was no esc…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 21 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 23 hours ago
@acancello (if you’re still on, you should look at this) @anyone-else
Here’s an Ottoline board!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 23 hours ago
Thank you so much!!! <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 23 hours ago
It’s hilarious because it doesn’t make sense. XDXD I love the twins lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 6 days ago
It’s from the How to Train Your Dragon shows, the episodes.
It’s a quote from Ruffnut and Tuffnut when they were talking about their Uncle Fenris (one of their numerous made-up relatives)
The full quote is:
“‘Fenris, Fenris, tall and fair, who did you let braid your hair?’ That was the rhyme we youngsters use to say to him. And he…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 6 days ago
Aw thank you so much!!!!
I use Canva!!!
The pure Andromedans appear exactly human except for color differences, but the only pictures I could find of people with blue skin, hair and eyes were like anime pics and I don’t like using cartoon photos for my boards XDXD
So like Lilitu has some blue birthmarks and blue streaks…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 1 hour ago
Thank you again for your help!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 2 hours ago
whoaaaa
that was a lot 😅😅
thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!
however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]
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