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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I have thought about what you said about the problems with Ottoline’s character, and have decided on a few new things about her history. I was thinking that instead of just the “laboratory”, that they take the Paynes to a work camp to build tools and new technology. Then if they become sick, or get out of line, then the Pythonos…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
@hybridlore
Well I’ve been doing volleyball, and working on my WIP a LOT! also I’ve been making moodboards for my characters and also I’ve been on KP a lot too. -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh my gosh I love fall too!!!! Fall weather is great 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@acancello @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr
Ottoline
She knew that he was waiting for her to tell him her story. They all were. Her first instinct was to shove the memories away. But he had been vulnerable and shared his. And so she began.
Letting go of his hand, just for a moment, she brought her shaking hands…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
thanks!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh….that’s hilarious haha
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! They are so sweet 😭
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
what do you mean by midnight?
But yes, at random times I just get urges to wear a hat….but not at midnight haha -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
Hi Flaz…..wait who’s Flaz, lololol I haven’t met him yet
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, that was kind of my plan that they could share each other’s stories!
Also, I love their “romance” they’re sooooo cute!!!
HOTTOLINE FOREVER!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr
Ottoline
“It’s going to be okay,” Hugo said, his voice cracking. Ottoline barely even heard him. She could still hear Jraldath’s words echoing in her mind…worthless…stupid….ugly, she could still feel the jarring sensation as she hit the floor. It is not okay, …[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr
Oh my gosh guys…Ottoline’s story is so sad, reading it literally almost made me cry (and I wrote it)!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer
Ottoline
Tired of the conversation, Ottoline decided to get a breather and sit on the inviting looking gray couch over in the corner. She pondered the past events in her mind. In one day, she had failed to get food, found a mysterious house, met new people, actually…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ve been learning a lot about Ottoline as well every time I write her POV. I think this is really helpful!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah a lot has happened….lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello
yep! so it’s official, lol. it will also build drama as the characters either begin to have suspicions of each other or to to the other side of the pendulum and begin to trust each other. (if this is the case, than “Hottoline” will become a bigger deal)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I love that idea! Actually I was just wondering if we should make the door be locked the other day, but wasn’t sure if you guys would want to do that.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay I’m pretty busy so not sure how much I’ll be able to be on, but sounds super fun!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I had a bonnet too!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh my gosh…my Little House phase lasted like three years! I would always wear my hair in two braids, and a dress (mainly one that my grandma made for me that looked exactly like something Laura would wear). I would even try to walk like Laura and hum the intro to the Little House movies!
It was really bad, lol
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Lol I mean it was literally the middle of the night and suddenly, I NEEDED to wear a hat 😂
Oh….that’s hilarious haha