SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@jonas

Did your mentor give you any suggestions? Because I think that it’s not good to only give negative feedback without any positive feedback or suggestions on how to fix the negative feedback.

That’s what gets a little frustrating with him. He finds flaws, and he tells me what they are but never tells me exactly how to fix them. If he doe…[Read more]

@jonas

Oh my gosh I love those!!!! I think my favorite is the one where “snake walks in”. Or “Ellis when Flaz starts talking”. Or when Zahlin talks. Those ones made me laugh XD

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Okay. You ever get that feeling where you want to grab your laptop and delete everything you’ve ever written and chuck it across the room?

yeah. That’s the mood I’m in.

I got an email today from a mentor that read my writing. He gives good advice…but often leaves me with a feeling of hopelessness for my WIP. Right…[Read more]

….lose their sense of smell, therefore they become immune to said scent…

@jonas

Sorry, I have to go. I might be on tomorrow. Bye!

@jonas

I know! I’m so sad I missed the line about “swiss cheese” lol that was great

And Flaz is hilarious, how he drives every person he meets insane!

@jonas

Wow! Thanks, that helps a lot XD

Sorry guys, I haven’t been on a ton. I’ve been really, really busy!

Can someone give me a quick recap?

I know she’s in a corner, but what exactly do I need to give her POV on?

@jonas @acancello @esther-c @rae @freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

WHAT IS GOING ON?? I am confuzzled

can someone give me a recap, lol

Where is Ottoline? What do I need to write her doing?

Sorry, I’ve been really busy with volleyball tournaments and haven’t had time to be on.

Can someone help me XD

The only drawback is…it leaves painful headaches for the “victim”…

@trailblazer

I mean, she could’ve had a crush before her family moved… but I didn’t think that far back lol. It doesn’t really matter for the sake of the story though. I’ll try to update this again soon.

Well, it’s the first in the story XD

SOMEONE HELP US THESE GUYS ARE QUITE POSSIBLY GOING TO MURDER EACH OTHER!” The Sword screamed.

Zahlin froze.

You’re welcome. Sword said proudly.

That’s hilarious

@trailblazer

Awww…Libbie has her first (????) crush!

I like this chapter!

@jonas

 From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.

Ellis doesn’t like anyone, lol XD

(except guys that have cool swords. Even then, there’s a chance he’ll hate you)

(just kidding.)

@rae

Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)

Ottoline

“Are you chilled?” He asked.

“I-I-” she began. She desperately wanted to run, but her feet might as well have been useless bricks.

“She’s alright,” a familiar voice spoke from next to her. Hugo. “She’s just a little on edge.” Ottoline managed to smile at him g…[Read more]

@grcr

lol

@rae @jonas

Ottoline

Oh no. 

The man approached, sword at his side. She shrank back, looking frantically for Hugo. Her heart beat faster with panic as she saw Hugo talking to Kari and Hedieh and Amir across the room.

She froze.

“Hello, my name is Lord Nahim,” he said.

Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a…[Read more]

@rae

Probably? Just don’t expect her to be totally comfortable XD

Any men with weapons scare her, unless she trusts them completely (obviously). But she’ll probably realize soon that no one’s going to hurt her.

Though, she’d probably also want to help since she hates the queen.

@jonas

From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him…

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