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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
YES!😭 I’m finishing my big novel up right now!!! Its 85k words unedited so I’m feeling pretty good about the length.
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Allison posted an update 10 months, 4 weeks ago
I cant take the suspense!
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
I just read your chapter above… ERICH!! He may be another one of my favorites…
Ahh, well, you’ll come up with something😊
I did! Luckily I remembered that we have melt and pour soap and other craft supplies.
Yep, sure is! I’ve had these characters and stuff for a while (and several of the characters also appeared in Fre…
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊
I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD
Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
it’s all true though…I became such a better writer when I joined KP and after talking to all of you guys!!
I did to! I dont think I would have ever got this is close to finishing without everyone on here <3
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Ok, I read them both. The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning chapter. That’s all I have for now, I will go over it more later today if I have time!
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
This is supposed to say “feel free to tag me in any post”…so yeah…XD
Dont worry, I understood XD I make errors like that all the time 😂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Awww your dedication and acknowledgement is so sweet 🥰
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
I have skimmed through these pages here and read pieces of your WIP and I have to say… I love them! Your really good at describing the way things look and feel. I will defiantly look through your link and give my critique 🙂 And pretty soon I will be posting some of mine to get feedback, I’ll be sure to tag you 🙂
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Allison posted an update 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76
Hi! We haven’t chatted in a while. I was wondering how you are doing? You ready for the holidays? <3-
@freedomwriter76
I cant see any of your replies on the comments, they pop up in my email but not on here.. (I think also a while ago you chatted me and asked how I was doing and I couldn’t see it and I feel so bad that I never responded 😂) I got the one you sent me today too in my email…
Anyway, I’m sorry your weekend was rough, if you ever…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Ouch! Ill be praying for you, hope you recover quickly <3
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I know it probably has to happen….but it’s going to like destroy poor Hugo…
It will destroy him, and it will also alter his personality in many ways 😭
(I mean at least Vikii can comfort him…still it’s sad though)
Exactly! I feel like having Vikii will make the future story better, (My brother is trying to convince me to write…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
And pretty much every time works for me, just let me know.
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
I’m in!!
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Allison posted an update 11 months ago
Calvin, go do something you hate! Being miserable builds character!
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@acancello
hey, this is random, but how’s writing going? more importantly, how’s Hugo??? <333 XD-
Hi! Thanks for asking, it means a lot 🙂 Its going pretty good, I went to a coffee shop last night and met a girl who was really interested in my work.
I am now at 80k and I’m soooooooooooooo close!!!!!!!!!!
Hugos good, right now hes helping people evacuate the city. XD
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@acancello
Oooh, coffee’s amazing!!! And I’ve also been getting closer to a girl at school who I consider to be in the popular group at school and I’ve always felt kinda inferior to her (cuz she’s amazing at sports and everyone likes her, while I’m just the quiet nerd of the class lol), but we’ve kinda bonded a little over our writing. She really…[Read more]-
Yeah, thats kind of the funny thing, I hate coffee XD I was there for my home school group, it was a board game night.
Thats great that you are getting closer to her! And she reads your stories? Thats great! I would have people read mine, but they need a lot of editing…. OH NO! Thank you! You just reminded me that I have not gotten any thing…[Read more] -
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Oh that’s funny XD I absolutely LOVE coffee…especially a good pumpkin spice latte (mmm….) My stories need a lot of editing, but as people read them then it inspires me to actually DO the editing lol
Oh no!!! XD I literally just looked up “gifts for mom” etc. I reccommend Amazon, it’s my best friend lol
OH I wish I was brave enough…[Read more]-
I should start having people edit.. that would be great!
We dont have Amazon so I will either make something or have my Dad take me shopping… Ill think of something XD
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You don’t have to have an Amazon account…you can just go to amazon.com and get what you need! If you don’t have an account you do have to pay for shipping…but yeah, it doesn’t bother me that much.
I know, it is so annoying how so many girls just are totally addicted to their phones!! I have a flip phone so I can’t do that much on…[Read more]
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Also, I really admire how social you are…like I am just so tense around social environments and just kind of want to disappear so yeah. Random thought XD I need to learn to be more social…
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4H sounds really fun! Thats so awesome, a steer? We are going to start raising pigs in the spring, which will be different. First year living on a farm😂!
I have a Samsung phone that takes the worst pictures in the world, but I mainly use it for texting and calling. Secretly I am crazy obsessed with video games (Nothing new or…[Read more]-
@acancello
I’m not on Christmas break yet…we get out on Thursday at 2, when we usually get out at 3:45 so it’s a nice early release! I probably won’t go to school on Thursday just because it’s going to be a big school party and I don’t want to play in a cornhole tournament just because…lol-
I dont blame you, cornhole is not the most exciting game XD Ive played a bit though since one of my good friends loves it, but usually they all turn into a good old fashioned game of ‘pelt’. XDXDXD
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@acancello
Turns out I might get out of school thursday the easy way…I just got sick XD AND I HAVE A TEST TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! the timing couldn’t be worse…but at the same time I have all the time I’m sick to study lol-
Aw man, being sick sucks. Hope you recover soon! <3 And a test? Oof, wish you luck 🙂 We are off school now, since we didnt take other breaks off throughout the year, but to be honest, I really miss it XD I love learning
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@acancello
Thanks <3 I love learning too!!! (everyone thinks I'm weird for that XD) Ooooh! A trip!! We might go to Havre (a town in Montana) this weekend for Christmas, if my mom's back gets better. It really hurts her to travel in a car, so it all depends on how she's feeling.
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That will be fun! Hopefully your Moms back gets better. Back injuries are rough! I guess now I’m not going? Plans changed again XD. We were going to go to D.C, but my parents didnt want to drive in the Christmas traffic. Oh well, there will always be another time!
And I know, learning is so… enlightening. My brother thinks…[Read more]-
@acancello
Oh no!! I’m sorry, DC sounds amazing, so sorry you guys don’t get to go 🙁 I kinda hope we can still go to Havre because that’s where my grandparents live, so it’s really nice to get to see them.
I would bring my books to work on at night…but I go to public school for almost 9 hours a day, so by the time I get home, the last thing I…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Girl that might be even worse….WHY WOULD YOU KILL HUGO’S SISTER???? I’m going to kidnap him and give him a hug and fuzzy blankets and hot cocoa…it’s so sad!!!!
😭😭😭😭 I know!!!! Though it fits the story better…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 We will see though, I’m writing that part right now and basically taking one step forward two steps back…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I dont thinks thats bad or weird, each person is different. Ill show mine to everyone but my parents😄
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I dont share my work with anyone in my family except my little brother who loves to hear my storys and hes the only one in my life right now who will listen to me yammer on about it for hours 🙂
Its really up to you whether you want to or not. My parents are both good people and love to read what I write, but I dont want to share my WIP…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Hey! Good job, that must be so exciting!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Aaaahhhh!!! I love it!!! Here… Ill write a quick one… (OH! Also I have decided in my WIP, Vikii does live! But instead of her its the main characters older brother and Hugos sister.😭)
Hugo
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Ottoline leaned her head on his shoulder. At first he thought it was an accident, but when she didnt move again he…[Read more]
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