@sarah-h
Active 8 years, 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Happy 2017! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Thanks @PerfectFifths.
Ours is in half an hour, and we’re staying up to meet it. 🙂 Some of us. 😉 -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Happy 2017! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Thanks @Perfect-Fifths.
Ours is in half an hour, and we’re staying up to meet it. 🙂 Some of us. 😉 -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ideas for a New Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield Well, there could be no singing Christian songs; no songs with mention of God; maybe all documents with God mentioned banned even if they weren’t particularly Christian works (things like the Constitution, maybe?)…
That all seems a little basic. 😛 I can’t really think what else would happen other than the banning of all…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Winter-Rose That is awesome!
Make sure you get your sleep. 🙂 -
Greta replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@alia
Oh my goodness, I’m so sorry. That’s really hard. I’ll definitely be praying for the little girl and all those involved. -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Alia I’ll be praying.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
Very good.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus It’s perfect. As long as web works grammatically with ‘a deep uncertainty’.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
Web! That works nicely, doesn’t it?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy Oh, subtlety? Hmmm…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy Oh, sublety? Hmmm…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
War-zone makes it sound like a WWII story.
@Daeus Myself is most sorry. *cringe* I didn’t remember who said to change it, but maybe that doesn’t work grammatically (why doesn’t ‘plummets into tangled plots work’ though?) …so do what yourself’s brain suggests. Critics aren’t for making you do what they want, after all, but for suggesting. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus I wasn’t thinking the font should be changed, just really toned down in color; I had meant for the design under the title when I said something more angular.
I suppose it could work the same way to change the font to something more angular…in fact that might be better ’cause I like sub-title design.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.
And actually, reading the other one again, I like it better as ‘plummets’, without the…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.
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Greta replied to the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper
I haven’t been on here lately, but thank you all the same. Merry Christmas to you, as well! -
Greta replied to the topic British beta-readers?? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
Alrighty @hannah-krynicki. I am SO sorry about the long wait again. I sincerely hope I didn’t hold up your writing process. Why don’t you send me all your questions, I’ll answer the ones I can, and send the rest to my British friends? That is, assuming you still need the questions answered. 😀 Again, I’m SO sorry about the wait.
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Greta replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Actually, wait…I just looked at the email you sent again @his-instrument. For some reason, I was thinking the Writer’s Gathering was on January 7. However, if it’s on the 21st, I might (just might) be able to make it. It’s about 1 hour and 30 minutes from where I live. Let me ask my mom and I’ll let you know. 😀
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Greta replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m SO sorry I haven’t responded to this until now @his-instrument! Ahh, I feel so bad. This past semester has been so crazy school-wise…It’s been insane. But that’s no excuse for not responding! I’m really sorry! Anyway, about the writing gathering…unfortunately, I don’t think I can make it. So sorry, and thanks so much for trying to…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus That is cool. Those buildings! I love them.
I think your name would look better the same sort of color as the title, but darker; and also what Hope said—the fonts do look a little mismatched.
Though actually…I think it’ll be great once you change the name color, without changing the font.
And the stuff about the rain too.The title…[Read more]
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