Sarah Hoven

Whew I took awhile writing that post…you’d not posted again when I started. Sorry ’bout that. 😛

Whew I took awhile writing that post…you’d not posted again when I started. 😛

@Winter-Rose I agree with the others about the awesome characterization and all, though I do have something to say that’s maybe weird…no offense meant in the least of course and I know you know that so good. XD
Um…I don’t really see the point/purpose of the story…I mean, it’s not giving us anything good to strive for or promoting any…[Read more]

I can’t see the picture properly because the monitor on this laptop is doing funky things to the screen, but I can see enough to agree with the others. It does look well done though, and *shudder* I’m purty sure I couldn’t do something like that!

I can’t see the picture properly because the monitor on this laptop is doing funky things to the screen, but I can see enough to agree with the others. It does look well done though, and *shudder* I’m purty sure I couldn’t do something like that!

@Rachelle Fourteen book series! 😮
Nah… Les Mis probably isn’t that long. It might seem longer ’cause it’s all in one chunk; but it’s only got 1460 pages. 😛

@Ethryndal Ahem, read above line and be grateful. XD The Silmarillion’s only what, in the 300s at most?

I know though, the preface—his letter to his publisher Milton Someone-Or-Other I…[Read more]

@Kate-Flournoy Yeah, rather unnerving, I’m sure. 😛

Potato in hand, she was about to cut it when its eyes blinked.

@Rachelle Ah, and you know Pride and Predjudice too, I see. 😉 (I think that’s the reference at least…)
I do piano too, and violin.

What, 2 movies and the Broadway musical?! You’re further along in that department than I am (yet. That must change.). Yes, it’s a very big book, but so worth it.

@Ethryndal You need support, eh? Poor thing. Is it…[Read more]

Yep, what @Ethryndal said, even though I didn’t know what it meant. @R-J-Wordsmith

@R-J-Wordsmith Ooh, I like that. It’s nicely short, but you still made it interesting and fit the story in.

*sniff*

I’m not sure I caught the meaning of the ‘condemned’ sign though; she died, but I don’t know any better than the mailbox what the sign means. 😛
Also I noticed a few missed words and letters, and punctuation errors—several…[Read more]

Hello and welcome @Rachelle! Do you play any instrument? Have you read Les Miserables?

that if my work can impact just one life for Christ, I’ll have succeeded.

@R-J-Wordsmith Yes.

@R-J-Wordsmith It’s good. 😉

@Kate-Flournoy *snort*

The door swung open, and the clocks stopped ticking.

Hi @R-J-Wordsmith! You sure fit here. 😀 Have you read Till We Have Faces by C.S. Lewis?

Hey, cool ideas.

I’ve got one.

You live in a world where no one walks, they all ride miniature trains. One day the trains stop working

Is that good? I’m new at this.

Wow. I just posted last night and already there are so many people willing to help. Wow.

Thanks to everyone for your advice, and thanks to everyone who offered to help me.

I will remember to not make a love triangle unless absolutely necessary… And I will attempt to stay away from cliches.

@Ingrid, thanks for the warning. 🙂 I used to be…[Read more]