Sarah Hoven

*tries to edit it*
*botheration, it’s not working*

Okay, this is even worse, but it might work. LINK TO POEM

@bluejay Okay, I’m stumped, so I’m going to fall back to my last, very embarrassing resort. My brother and I played around with starting a Creation Science website, but then we realized we didn’t have enough information to make a good website. So we used it as a “launching pad” to get his pictures on to KP. So (if it works) this is a picture of…[Read more]

@bluejay @claireC @anna-brie How are you all doing? Has it been harder/ easier than you thought? Are you glad you’re doing it? I’m not sure what I was expecting, but so far it hasn’t been hard at all, although there have been a few moments of temptation. I’m glad I’m doing it. Especially since we just moved, so my 2 1/2 hour routine has been…[Read more]

@bluejay That’s cool! The shape is a lightbulb, right?

Thanks! I’ll try that. 🙂

@hannah-c It looks good to me. Short and sweet, like Brianna said. I don’t think you’re missing anything. 🙂

@ClaireC I would read it because I like war fiction, especially WWII fiction, and I like Australia. If this is your actual book synopsis, you might want to focus more on Evelyn’s character arc, like Josiah said. But if this is just your basic story idea, I like it. 🙂

@bluejay Wow, that’s amazing! It’s so realistic. How did you post it? I’m still figuring out how to do mine.

@bluejay I think I’m gonna stick it through ’til October, but you guys have fun! Sounds like it might be the Hobbit, which I can’t read anyway. Enjoy your new Club Manager position! 🙂

@bluejay This is really great. I’m not sure what kind of poetry it is, but I like it a lot. The only thing that seemed out-of-place was the word “Polite” ending the gentleness verse. I’m not sure why. Maybe because the other lines are focusing on the sweet, thoughtful, er…gentle nature of gentleness. Is that helpful?
Visual poetry is a lot of…[Read more]

@bluejay That’s too bad. Living in the country is such fun (for me anyway), but the downside of it -no people- is pretty terrible. This is the first year I’ve been part of a good youth group, but it’s changed my life and I’d miss it a lot if we had to leave. KP is so awesome. I’m glad you are able to get some Christian fellowship, even though it’s…[Read more]

@bluejay I was in church, first at a conference and then at youth, pretty much all day today, and although I didn’t have much time for Bible reading, I got touched by the Holy Spirit in a pretty amazing way. So I had a completely awesome day in that respect. Hopefully I’ll be able to read a lot tomorrow. I’m kinda fired up right now. Guess what…[Read more]

@hope If I were you, I would keep the prophecy stanza and delete the bolded part entirely. Although it’s poetic, it doesn’t really add anything and it’s very vague.

I agree with deleting the bolded sentences. And it seems too long to go on the back of a book, but I really like it. It’s a good summary. The one phrase that really doesn’t flow is “An oath to the king and an assassination attempt later, the messenger…” I’m too tired to think of anything else, though. 🙂