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@sarah-anson

Currently I’m editing my novel (or, you know, looking at Pinterest)

@sarah-anson

I’m writing now! What’re you working on today?

@sarah-anson The reason I wanted to use this POV was because I wanted to follow a group of people instead of just one protagonist. (the genre is sci-fi/dystopian. and yes, I like that genre 😛 )

Love that snippet! 😀

@sarah-anson Hi, welcome back! 😉 did you take a hiatus? *wonders if I missed an update you posted*

@seekjustice and @ariel-ashira pretty much covered things. Definitely read Raspberry Blood! It’s awesome 🙂

btw, I’m not writing right now. maybe later (????)

@sarah-anson

Well, the Kingdom is mostly made up of Rochellaine and Alia and I bickering, Jen and Ariel being sweet and Catwing being…Catwing. A few others pop in now and then, but we’re the staunch supporters TILL WE’RE OLD AND GREY!!

@sarah-anson If you want to read about the new KP movement that is shaking the forum, read the first several pages of this topic.  You might also enjoy my poem Raspberry Blood after that.  That is, if you have not stayed up with us much and don’t know about it already.

@sarah-anson We are driving from Missouri to Idaho.  You live around there?

@sarah-anson Hi!  My Dad and I are on a trip, and as we went through Colorado yesterday, @alia and I met each other in real life!

@sarah-anson Wow, thank you for all the advice! 😉 It was really helpful. I agree about the ending; it didn’t turn out the way I wanted to and felt rushed. I’ll work on Rin’s character arc about trusting God as well.

Thank you again! 😀 <3

@warrenluther04 @seekjustice @ingridrd @skredder @ariel-ashira @sarah-anson @anyone else I missed

I forgot to ask one last thing: do you have any title ideas? I really like one or two word titles, so I don’t really like the one it has now. Any and all ideas would be appreciated 🙂

@warrenluther04 @ariel-ashira @skredder @ingridrd @sarah-anson @seekjustice @whoever else I missed Here’s the questions now that y’all have finished reading my book. Thank you all so very much! Your comments always make me so happy and help me to improve. <3 I’m sorry if I’m posting this and not everyone has finished it yet; I’ve lost track of w…[Read more]

@skredder @ingridrd @seekjustice @sarah-anson @warrenluther04 Alrighty everybody, this is the last chapter!!!! *sobs*

I’m not sure if the ending is quite right, so be sure to let me know what y’all think. 😉 When you’re finished reading it, I have some questions I’d like to ask you all if you don’t mind.…[Read more]

@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson @ingridrd Here’s chapter 9 everyone! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jeGlitQ4YGIDWcHT4CY0aSZAXpak0LnPmJq8jq6eZNI/edit

@sarah-anson Awesome! You should have access now 🙂

@skredder @seekjustice Here’s chapter 8

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I3WMWDus6-dny3KZO-vPHI-KNqTbPUzd5yUYR2iGLYc/edit?usp=sharing

@sarah-anson @warrenluther04 Would you two like to read it too? 🙂

@sage-g @notawriter @ariella-newheart @sarah-anson

Could one or two of you possibly draw me a character, please? 🙂

Randal—is 17, has auburn hair, green-yellow eyes, and a soft smile.  He has a long white scar down the side of his neck.  Clothing-wise, anything casual, probably just a T-shirt and jeans.

Hopefully that’s enough info!  😉

@sarah-anson I know what it’s like to have a MC that just. Won’t. Be. Compelling!!! *tears out hair* The MC of my story that is currently on hold was like that. She had a backstory I loved, she was quirky, realistic, and had a story goal. But what I found was holding her back from being interesting (or even likeable) was that she was kind of in…[Read more]

@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit

@daughteroftheking
Kay would rather relive it.
She refuses to tell me what it was though…

Alexandria Evergreen (Alex) would rather talk about it.
Sneaking to the Northern part of Evergreen forest.

@sarah-Anson
Kay would sit in the cell with her worst enemy, Alice, and hope she doesn’t go insane. She doesn’t want someone she likes to hate her…[Read more]

@sarah-Anson I agree with @skredder @gh24682468999 @ariel-Ashira . Interview your character, write him in a different scene, flesh out your character.
But in edition something you could do for fun (though it will probably help) is to make a collage for him. I had to figure out somethings when I made my collages. Also got me excited about my book. 😋