Sink

It could have been abandoned by the original population for a relatively harmless and simple reason, such as:

1. It was quickly built to house workers brought in to collect valuable resources, and when the resources ran out, the people moved on.

2. There was a natural disaster, such as a massive tornado, hurricane, or earthquake, which destroyed…[Read more]

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly *ahem* If you’ve noticed, I’m the only one actually tripping on them. My rocks, my problem. *smirks*

@salome01w4g @christi-Eaton @daughteroftheking Thank you! Trust me, I have a whole BOATLOAD of stuff that I may dump on you randomly someday… *walks off whistling*

and @daughteroftheking that hummingbird is SOO pretty! And I like the hand. 😀

Eagle of the Ninth is one I will eternally recommend. 😉

Also, Ranger’s Apprentice. It’s not really fantasy.

Sherwood Ring (This is a romance, but not a Christian one, but I don’t think there were any problems with it. Mostly it’s a hilarious, exciting mystery involving Revolutionary War-era ghosts.)

Hi @sam-kowal! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! (I just joined myself!) Don’t worry, you won’t be a bumbling henchman for long. Currently I’m a …wise jester?

Well, that’s accurate. 😄 Anyway, welcome and don’t be afraid to ask questions! Most of the people on here don’t bite. 😉

@lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.

@lifeofkatie On the button?

I’m writing a romance…I’m not sure if I’m following the rules, @daeus. But it’s going ok in my brain. So. YEAH.

#PANTSING!

@lifeofkatie *eats all the ice cream*

@emma-flournoy I won’t tell Josiah what you said about frogs. *mourns over frogs*

@perfectfifths. Hmm. I just noticed one day that it was true because…I noticed it.

@dragon-snapper

The thing I don’t like about romances is that they are fake. They make them too emotional. People aren’t like that.

They are so totally fake, but I don’t actually think people are any less emotional. They’re just less cheesy about it. ……[Read more]

Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.

@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie

Okay! How about this?

http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/

My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of your characters react at that point or the reader will not react. For instance, if you think you can get your rea…

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@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀

@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but I have written it just a bit.

My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]

@ethryndal First off, I’ve been meaning to say this.

Secondly,

YOU’VE BEEN ON FOR A YEAR?!! A YEAR ALREADY! SWEET!

@winter-rose Thank you so much, were safely at my grandparents house but it’s in the city and had some “culture shock” after basking in the country for over a month. 😉

@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.