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@kate-flournoy @daeus Thank you both! I’ve been meaning to get part 2 of the course…. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Yeah, what Kate said is huge. If you have part 2 of my Show Don’t Tell Course, I have a whole lesson on live scenes there, but basically a live scene is the literary version of a camera taking in everything that’s happening in a scene. No time is skipped. An overview is like when someone tells you what happened at their birthday…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 heh… I’ve got the opposite problem. 😛

*scratches head* I would say probably the number one thing that makes my novels so ridiculously long is the crazy amount of time I spend really delving into the layers of chemistry in live scenes. I try to do all live scenes if I possibly can (no summaries, no overviews, no generalizations)…[Read more]

@skredder Awesome! I’ll try to read it tonight 😉

@seekjustice I’m gonna have to go now. I might be on tomorrow 🙂

@seekjustice I’m back! are you still here?

Oh my goodness I’m sorry @seekjustice! I just popped on and left. Will you be on later?

actually sorry no I can’t write right now. I might be on later though.

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder Anyone writing?

@sarah-anson Those are so good!!! I especially like the first one 🙂

ooh someone tag me! 😀

@sarah-anson Oh I didn’t know you read it! (or maybe I did but I forgot) 😀 Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

I just gave you access for chapter 6, and the other links should be earlier in this topic. 🙂 thank you!

@skredder Stellar! I should be able to start reading it some time tonight 🙂 I think the pace you’re putting the links out is good, since I’m reading for Seekjustice too.

@skredder @seekjustice Here’s chapter 6! 🙂

And fear not, I’ll be putting off writing a little bit to catch up on reading both of your books *cough*because*cough*Seekjustice writes too fast for me to keep up *cough* 😉

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PruwKQKCOSdDVpAvs_Avwubpf4wrdfiW-cFHg_WDtcE/edit?usp=sharing

@rochellaine sorry, I can’t write now. Maybe tomorrow evening. 🙂

@ariel-ashira you can create a sidekick if you’d like 😉

@livgiordano Thanks, I’ll check those out too 🙂

HI ALL! I knew this is a high-traffic topic, so I wanted to let people know here; Nadine Brandes is doing a giveaway on her website for some books by Veronica Roth ( 😀 ). It’s international, so here’s the link if anyone wants to take part:

https://nadinebrandes.com/2018/04/25/veronica-roth-giveaway/ 

@jane-maree @rochellaine @seekjustice…[Read more]

Aaaaand I have to leave again. Bye 🙂

@ariel-ashira @seekjustice @rochellaine Well unexpectedly I’m on a bit more tonight. Writing and reading Seekjustice’s part 2 as well. (don’t worry, I’ll try my best to catch up in reading 😉 )