@sam-kowal
Active 7 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Joy replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@his-instrument I love the storyline!
It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit…?
Anyway, sure! I’ll read it. 🙂
Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though…
@daeus @aratrea @sam-kowal @seekjustice @jane-maree @princessfoo @introvert_girl
(P.S. This is comple…[Read more]
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GabbyJ replied to the topic Hi, I'm GabbyJ! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
Whoops– @sam-kowal
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What IS a Character Arc?? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel @sam-kowal got it in a nutshell. Basically, if your character starts the book bitter and angry, goes through the plot and comes out having forgiven and learnt to love (or vice versa) that is a character arc. Its just how your character changes through the story.
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Joy replied to the topic What IS a Character Arc?? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal Ahh okay, thanks a lot!
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Joy started the topic What IS a Character Arc?? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@jane-maree @sam-kowal @princessfoo @daeus @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @aratrea
I have seen articles all over Kingdom Pen about how to improve character arcs, but I’m not totally sure what a character arc is! Can someone please explain it?
Thanks! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic How Do I Write a Sad Ending?! in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17Â Good question! I think you should leave the story with the characters feeling hopeful, even if it’s just a little hopeful, in the circumstances. You character should be motivated to set her wrongs right, and to improve everyone’s image of her, by saving the queen, or helping to save the queen, or doing her part in any way. If you…[Read more]
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GabbyJ replied to the topic Hi, I'm GabbyJ! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
Hi, nice to meet you, @sam-kowal! *Runs off to scribble “spiky spikes spiking out all over him” in a notebook of ingenious descriptions* 😛
Right now I’m working on a trilogy called Dragons of Alamire, and I’m still editing the first book, Awakening. How about you? What kind of filmmaking do you enjoy? : )
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 4 months ago
Yes! 3000 posts! @kate-flournoy @daeus I’m catching up now.
Anyway, now that I’ve reached that, I’m going to take a nice Christmas hiatus. I’ll be back next year. 😉 By that I mean like two weeks-ish. When I return, I might or might not have LKD3 done.
Merry Christmas! 😀@shannon (and tag your sister for the sake of limited tags) @dekreel @sa…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
Perfectfifths Ike would rather be chased by ringwraiths.
@whoever asked this question: Go to a tea party, believe or not.
@catwing Would rather wear a very fancy suit.
@singforjoy He would rather be deaf, cause then he couldn’t listen to what people were telling him to do. XD
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
@catwing Michael doesn’t really have a greatest enemy, so he’d choose one of his parents. Though I’m not sure if he’d choose to swap places with his mom or his dad. Maybe his mom, because her life seems less stressful.
@dragon-snapper Probably a sith, his only reason being that he hates having to conceal his emotions.
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introvert_girl replied to the topic Brainstorming help in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus I had another question related to your article. In the case of a short story, do you think a character’s yearning should be fulfilled by the end?
@sam-kowal Thanks, that was super helpful! Your first idea sparked what I think is going to be a large element of the plot now. (Character A has a project they need to finish, but because they’re…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal Link, probably fight. 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Hi, I'm GabbyJ! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal well, I never knew…
You learn something new every day!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Hi, I'm GabbyJ! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal wait, Stan if orange??? I always imagined him to be dark blue. *wanders away, mindblown*
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@catwing Hello! Wow, that’s four Kapeefers writing a KP fanfic! You, me, @dragon-snapper and @sam-kowal!
I just posted the full prologue on the KPA thread if you wanna see ;3
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @lady-iliara @dragon-snapper @aislinn-mollisong @catwing @daughteroftheking @sam-kowal @alia @KAPEEFERS!
I am currently on the third chapter, and I decided that it was time to show you guys the full prologue!
So here you go! Please feel free to make suggestions and comments!
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introvert_girl started the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
Apologies if someone has done something like this before, but I thought it would be fun. Feel free to answer the questions I came up with, or share your own, or both!
@singforjoy @dekreel @sam-kowal @emily @dragon-snapper @leumeister ya’ll can tag others if you like bc I don’t know many people’s names yet.I’ll do one goofy one sad question…[Read more]
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introvert_girl started the topic Brainstorming help in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
I’m trying to outline a short story and thought I’d ask for help with brainstorming. What I have so far for the story, is that character A gets stuck out in the rain, and catches a cold/fever. Character B tries to look after them, like make them warm soup or whatever. They knew each other before the story, but aren’t really close friends yet.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic A KeePer Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal *looks down menacingly* And what have you been doing to earn a punishment?
Doesn’t matter, you can tell me after you’ve had your dues.
You, Sam Kowal, are sentenced to three days of labor in my ice cream factory. There are three rules.
1. You must have ice cream samples as often as you like.
2. You must work at exactly the pace that…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@epicaddie2 I love this thread!
@sam-kowal that  quote from Gandal is one of my favourites.
Here are a few of  my favourites:
“He is no fool to give up what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose” Jim Elliot
“It is not worth living for if it is not worth dying for” Elisabeth Elliot (thats a paraphrase, Â I can’t remember the exact wo…[Read more]
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Congratulations on your posting-ness! 😉 Have a good hiatus and don’t melt too many chairs. 😛 *extends a box full of… whatever dragons want for chirstmas.*
We shall miss you. Fare thee well, friend.
@dragon-snapper Merry Christmas, Happy New Year, and have a nice supply of chairs on hand for your hiatus…
And Cya next year 😀
Good job! *throws candy canes at you* I’ll miss you and can’t wait to see you next year!
Congratulations on your postfullness! 😉 Merry Christmas!
@daughteroftheking @dekreel @epicaddie2 @emily @shannon @sam-kowal @daeus @kate-flournoy @seekjustice
Didn’t feel like waiting till next year.
I’m back now. 😉