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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Though definitely intriguing. Why did poor Cele see gongs and get confused?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Well, you certainly know how to disturb people.
Goodnight
And yours is just a tad confusing 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Oh, and @valtmy I can’t wait to read your book once it’s completed! 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice @catwing @valtmy This was so much fun! And very useful. 😀 😀
I’m going to depart now.
Goodnight everyone!  Happy writing!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing @seekjustice @valtmy 342 words.
My chosen sentence:
The ache in her stomach intensified, and she pressed a hand against it as though it would calm at the touch.
The last sentence I wrote:
I shall go tonight.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I just finished my fifteen minutes. I got 415.
My last sentence (hence my interest in colts):
Several foals, all varying shades of brown, three black mares and a yearling colt, who looked big enough to be kicked out of the mob any day now.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Well, I don’t know if you like fantasy, but her historical fantasy Fawkes is really good. 🙂
Alright, I have to leave now. Enjoy word warring! 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Well, I’ve just noticed a lot of use of the word colt. Just then I saw “rounding up mustang mares and colts”, etc. So I was wondering if it had a different meaning.
“Some guns are called colts” was also my immediate thought.
All right, I’m putting on my timer again @Catwing
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing I’ll start now, then. 🙂
@jenwriter17 I’ve heard many things about Nadine Brandes, but I have never read any of her stuff. 😛
@valtmy Glad you’re here! See you at the end of the word war!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy Heyo! 😀
@catwing @seekjustice @rochellaine Do you all know that Nadine Brandes is having a giveaway for a signed copy of Fawkes and some other Fawkes-related goodies? 🙂 You can find the link to enter through her latest Youtube video.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice @catwing
I think I’ll sit out of the wars for the rest of the night. Been pushing myself to crank out the words these past several hours, and I’m feeling not so inspired and motivated now, so I’m gonna leave soon I think. I’ll be on to chat for a bit though. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Do you mean in horse books that you haven’t seen Americans using those words to describe horses? Or just in general that Americans don’t describe horses correctly?
Because somewhat depending on the part of the country they’re from, or how they were raised, a lot of Americans don’t know anything about horses. Or any animals. I me…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice I think all those terms are a little confusing for some people (including me, tbh 😛 ), and I don’t think all horse books get it right anyway, so maybe that’s why Americans don’t use the terms that often. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
But some people are named Colt.
😛 And my first thought was “Some guns are called Colt”
If we’re doing last sentences, then mine was pretty boring too. It was
And then Yishay had been there to meet her.
😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Righto. The things I was reading seemed to indicate it meant more generally a horse that hadn’t reached mature age. Here it very specifically means a horse between 1-4. Younger than 1 is a foal, and a female is a filly. I’ve never really seen any Americans use those terms though, which was why I was a little confused.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Okay, my sentences were all pretty short in the last section I wrote, so I’m going to give two that go together:
“We have not killed your brother, girl. We speak the truth.”
@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Shall we have another word war?
@valtmy Are you home yet?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing I think I like the idea of choosing our favorite sentences better 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
We use the word colt for a male horse that hasn’t reached adult age yet.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @jenwriter17
And I’m pretty sure I have no interesting sentences, but this one…
This brumby was one of a highly sought after colouring–not quite pure white, but not cream or golden either.
…is a reference to one of my favourite childhood books, The Silver Brumby.
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