Hannah

Okay, I actually did this thing. 😀 I’m now on Pinterest posting writing tips.

https://www.pinterest.com/excelsiorwritingschool/pins/

Hmm. I don’t know who would be interested in this. Here are some random tags. 🙂

@anne-of-lothlorien @seekjustice @graciegirl @mariposa @winter-rose @jenwriter17 @inkling-for-christ @christi-eaton @epicaddie2

@emily-d  *pursues* *growls ferociously*  …Just kidding ;P  I see what you’re saying about the weirdness and stuff. Personally, I like it because of the action, and because it was interesting seeing what Meg was learning.

I hear there’s a new movie coming out, so maybe that one will be better. Although, it’s a Disney movie, so… I don’t kn…[Read more]

@emily-d  I got through like a third of the book before I… got bored of it. It’s intriguing, and very well-written, but there’s barely any action, just talking. And talking. And talking. Is suppose if I read the rest of it I would change my mind…… But it’s been awhile, and I think I’d have to start over at the very beginning.

So…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ

Yeah, what @sam-kowal said. 😛

All KeePers and Kapeefers alike, I can also seriously recommend this course. Click it. Sign up. Do the thing.

@Winter-rose perfect. 🙂

@winter-rose I like the new one! It read a lot smoother than the first, and I wasn’t confused. I don’t think you need the extra line; it adds too much info.

I really don’t see anything else I would change. *thumbs up*

@inkling-for-christ First person and third person really aren’t that different. Mood setting descriptions, body language, sensations — they all still work. If you have trouble telling in a first person story, it seems you have a telly-y narrator. If your narrator is constantly telling how he/she feels or giving too much information about the…[Read more]

@winter-rose eh… close enough. ;P

@jenwriter17 well first of all, I must have somehow missed your introduction cuz I don’t remember saying hello. Hello, and welcome. 😉 I’m an old timer here, but I haven’t been around much lately due to crazy life. I’m so pleased to see new faces filling in.

Writing goals… *whimpering laugh*

Oh boy.

1. FINALLY get the third draft of the book…

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@Winter-Rose nineteen this coming March… how close are we? 😛

@winter-rose I like it overall, but I’m confused on a couple of points.

First of all, the reason he doesn’t want to guard Amy… from the first line, it seems that he doesn’t like the Slate family. From the second line, it seems that he specifically doesn’t like Amy. From the third line it seems that he just doesn’t like girls in general.…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ Haha! 😀 I don’t think I’ve ever seen a “show don’t tell” review before. Good job.

@mariposa Impressive! I’ve never even gotten a gingerbread house to stand up, let alone look that good!

@mariposa *blinks* Stop torturing me.

@inkling-for-christ

*squints*

Did @daeus put you up to this to get free advertising?

Nah, just kidding! 😉

Yes, I got the email, but I haven’t had a chance to do the course yet. From your stellar recommendation, though, I definitely will do it soon. One of my weaknesses is relying on telling, especially when I’m writing in third person.

@sam-kowal Yeah… Luke mentioned that Kylo took some of his students without killing them, so I wonder what happened to them? Is he training them in the dark side?

I loved it too. One of my favourites alongside Rogue One. Kylo Ren has to be my favourite villain of all time. I was pleasantly surprised.

@gabbyj *hands you hot chocolate* Worry not. I know my close relatives can get out of hand sometimes. 😛

@theacornman I love your signature. XD

@mariposa This is epic. 😀 XD Love the frogs. And my fire.

The only thing I don’t like about it is that you’re making me hungry.