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@seekjustice Haha.  Nope, Zac is my one and only top favorite character out of both of your books. 😀  But I have a few others I like a lot.  Lets see…

Jean. I feel like I could like Jean a lot, but don’t know him very well.  He seems to play a very significant role in the lives of Chessy, Justice, Quillon, and Kai, as well as Dr. Manly, and…[Read more]

@seekjustice And…wait a minute!  You were laughing at us?!  Why?  Why would you laugh at us, your loyal fans, who deeply admire you?  When we say we love your characters, it’s only a compliment to you, isn’t it?  Then why would you laugh at us? *pouts* *giggles*

@seekjustice I don’t remember saying that.  Could you point me to the specific post to which you are referring?

I’m back!  Anyone here? @jenwriter17 @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira @kaya-young

@jenwriter17 I’ll pray for you. I think a lot of people can relate to not being happy with how they look.  :/ It definitely can get on one’s nerves. *cough*feelya*cough*

@seekjustice I’m glad to hear it!

@jenwriter17 That makes sense how she would feel about her powers. Do you have any specific powers in mind?

@jenwriter17 Those are all great ideas!! Thanks. 🙂  I actually remember trying each of them accidentally before, and that they helped a lot, so I’ll be trying them again soon.  Right now I’m taking a break though, so, hope to see you later tonight with @seekjustice 😀

@alia No spoilers!  Okay. 🙂  Second what Jen said about not reading up, sin…[Read more]

@seekjustice I’m so glad your wrist is better!!

@jenwriter17 I’ll be praying for you!  I especially get the problem of people thinking I’m younger than I really am. 🙂  Since I’m so little people often call me “cute” or “honey,” especially when I’m out with my dad, and that causes big problems for when I’m trying to do business. 😛  I’ve even had to ask my dad to wait in the car sometimes in or…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 No, not really writer’s block.  I know what to write.  It’s more lethargy.  I’m not excited about writing.  Usually when that happens I just work on something else for a while, just like I do when I have writer’s block.  But lately I haven’t been excited about writing anything at all.

Theoretically, I’m actually still excited abou…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Slowly, slowly!  My sister came in a few days ago and said, “I was just thinking, I haven’t read your book in a while, so maybe I can read the new parts now?”  And I said, “There’s nothing new.  I’ve written, like, a few paragraphs.” 🙁  Part of the problem is that I just don’t make myself sit down and write, though.  I get dist…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Haha, I’m sorry.  I was telling SeekJustice a couple of days ago that the editing is the easiest part for me.  It’s the writing that’s much harder!  It can take me a couple of hours to edit something that took me several days to write.  Sounds like you have the opposite problem. 😛

@jenwriter17 Yes!  Seriously, you kept raving about Justice, but I didn’t like him in the first book because he was too emotionless, and while I like him better in this book, he’s now an emotional wreck, basically, and I much prefer Zac.  SeekJustice says if Quillon came alive she’d marry him, but it’d have to be Zac for me. 😛

Ah, yes.  And my…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 *DISCLAIMER* I may not have been the one to call for this, because I’m not a big superhero person. I’ll try to be helpful though. *END OF DISCLAIMER. HAVE A NICE DAY*

My biggest advice would to work on all the villain’s motivations and make them human. I think you’ve got the opportunity to give Kaylee adversaries that will challenge…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 I think I’d had a nap that afternoon, and when I have a really long nap I don’t get tired at night.  Therefore it’s not a very good idea for me to take a nap, usually… 😛

Of course he is!  Zac is the best character out of both books. 😉

At the end of the document there are comments from a couple of the readers, which were pretty f…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira I think I’ve only read three of them, and since they’re stand-alone there might be a few that I would like.  First-off, the thing that till make the most sense to you is I don’t like darkness.  And his stories are full of that.

Now, about the specific stories.  One was advocating the right to kill one person to save many.  That is…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Haha!  I do get tired sometimes, you know. 😉

@jenwriter17 Nope. 😛  I think the lastest we’ve gone to was 4:00 a.m. one time. 😮

How’s it going?  Who’s your favorite character now that you’re almost done with the book?  (Give you three guesses on mine…)

@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Halloo!

@jenwriter17 Here’s a thought, her mad scienctist uncle could have given her parents super powers. The bad guys found out he was experimenting with giving people powers, but don’t know he succeeded. The uncle knowing what they would do if they had the powers pretends to be far behind on his creation. He keeps all his notes in codes so the bad guy…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Whenever I hear “superhero WIP” I become wary because I pretty much hate Josiah’s stories, but I’ll try to give an unbiased opinion. 😛

So…my first thought on reading your ideas was that if I read the book I would immediately think her grandparents were villains.  Maybe you should play this up a bit, and either have her trust them…[Read more]