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Keleigha Liess and Anne Swiftblade are now friends 7 years, 6 months ago
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
@graciegirl Well that took longer than expected. Sorry. Here’s Nykkai. She didn’t exactly turn out how I intended. (It would seem that none of my drawings do… 😛 ) Her eye’s are a little too white.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
@graciegirl Well that took longer than expected. Sorry. Here’s Nykkai. She didn’t exactly turn out how I intended. (It would seem that none of my drawings do… 😛 ) Here eye’s are a little too white.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien THREE BABIES!!! How fun! I’ll definitely pray for your aunt—my mother wasn’t able to have children until she was older, either. And of course I’ll pray for your mother and other aunt. And happy root canal, which I just realized is happening today. I be praying.
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Ethryndal's profile was updated 7 years, 6 months ago
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper *randomly pops in* Whoa! That is so good! I love how he’s laughing in the bottom one—I can practically hear it.
And thanks for compiling the characters. @graciegirl, I think I’m going to try Nykkai.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy *has confidence in abilities* Well that makes me happy.
@delightinlife Sometimes when I’m writing short stories, I find that it helps to just forget about word limitations and write how you want. Then, when you’re done, you can go back through and carefully weed out any extraneous words or parts. And it might behoove you to ditch…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess and AbigailRose are now friends 7 years, 6 months ago
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife Muahahaha—*chokes* Ahem. Please keep in mind that I’m not the most experienced writer, and emotions are one of the things I struggle with, so take everything I say with a grain of salt. But I am reading a book about writing emotions, so here’s what I’ve learned from it so far.
First of all, writing your own emotions into Josiah…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife If I can be of any help later on, I be here. 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Oh. Look at that. Brianna just wrote an article about my post. Why am I always late to everything? 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Oh. Look at that. Brianna just wrote an article about my post. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife I just want to add—Thank you for letting me beta read your story! Beta reading is something I don’t get to do very often, but I find that working objectively through someone else’s writing helps me better my own. Handing one’s Precious over to the merciless arms of the editors is never an easy thing, and I appreciate your bravery…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper *breathes heavy sigh of relief* Oh good, I’m not the only one around here who’s read Treasure Island. 🙂
@that_writer_girl_99 You’re in good hands with these Classic nerds, but can I add one? Pwease? *bats eyelashes prettily* Jane Eyre. Slightly creepy, but still a good book. 😀
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I like chapter titles. Mind you, I’m probably going to end up not having them in my book, because I hate coming up with them, but as a reader, I really like them. They give a hint of what’s coming without being too obvious. You know, “As the Shadow Fell” or something cool like that. Before I start a book, I always read the table of contents first…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Aww, that must be frustrating for him. I’ll pray.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I’m really sorry this is taking me so long.
Scene One: On her journey, Liriel stops at a human town to spend the night. It’s her first excursion into the world of mortals, and because a good friend of hers always spoke highly of them, and she secretly hopes to see the extraordinary side of them that he does.
Scene Two: She finds an inn…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I’m really sorry this is taking so long.
Scene One: On her journey, Liriel stops at a human town to spend the night. It’s her first excursion into the world of mortals, and because a good friend of hers always spoke highly of them, and she secretly hopes to see the extraordinary side of them that he does.
Scene Two: She finds an inn to…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Woot! Yeesh, thirteen pages…
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife Well, I’m done. 😀
Okay, I was thinking about the whole part with Reuben, and this is my idea (which is probably terrible): What if Reuben wasn’t bullying the squire? What if the kid had done something wrong, and Reuben was reprimanding him? But to Josiah, who missed the first part of the conversation, it looks like the knight is…[Read more]
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