S.G.Dewey

@Perfectfifths *sigh* I totally missed the English gentleman look that I was aiming for…

@f5a8c3e92 Aha. I think you should make that a little clearer though. Not explaining it, because obviously, you want it to be confusing, but just showing that something abnormal happened. Because honestly, I thought she was having a dream.

@Anne-of-Lothlorien Well, here’s my attempt, which, after reading your description again, I don’t think is very accurate. He’s too young and adventurous looking. I may try again later.

@Anne-of-Lothlorien Well, here’s my attempt, which, after reading your description again, I don’t think is very accurate. He’s too young and adventurous looking. I may try again later.

Well guys, @That_writer_girl_99 @Winter-rose @Daeus, that’s it for me. I finished part of a short story.

@Daeus Hullo.

@Winter-Rose *indignant sniff* I believe I’m offended.

@Dragon-Snapper Fare thee well!

@Winter-Rose Nope, you can’t join. 😉

@That_writer_girl_99 *quickly gives you some too*

@Dragon-Snapper *gives you chocolate chip marshmallows which explode into glitter at the last second*

@Dragon-Snapper @That_writer_girl_99 *passes around mugs of steaming coffee* Please, take it all. Blech.

@Dragon-Snapper I have to go make coffee for my dad, but then I’ll be back. DON’T LEAVE WITHOUT ME!

@Dragon-Snapper The Fate of Timing…who can know her ways?

@that_writer_girl_99 Sure, I’ll pray for you! Good luck on the story.

@Dragon-Snapper By eight minutes…

@f5a8c3e92 Phooey, I missed the critiquing party. And @Emma-Flournoy, with her wonderful thoroughness, has pretty much read my mind on the subject of the second draft. XD So, yeah. Good job.

Oh, one thing: That first part, when Halle’s running from bad guys, and then wakes up in a castle. That confused me just a litte. Was running from bad guys a…[Read more]

@f5a8c3e92 Phooey, I missed the critiquing party. And @Emma-Flournoy, with her wonderful thoroughness, has pretty much read my mind on the subject of the second draft. XD So, yeah. Good job.

Oh, and did I hear that you’re left handed? That’s so cool! My sister’s left handed. I *sniff* unfortunately, am…not.