Kingdom Pen | Ryanna | Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/ryanna/activity/ Activity feed for Ryanna. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 8b2674382e626b92f89ccd77c3217110 Ryanna replied to the topic Plot Help? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/plot-help/#post-42877 Tue, 05 Sep 2017 23:31:47 -0400 @princessfoo So, the simple outline of the plot is an island that my two main characters, Randella and Azura, are stranded on. This island has never been stepped foot on by a human, and it’s called ‘Athiktos.’ (Which is Greek for ‘untouched’) The island is inhabited by intelligent animals (this part I’m still figuring out. Some of it I make up as…[Read more]

]]> 4b6bc804bce7f1dfbd259d51c7ff1429 Ryanna started the topic Plot Help? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/plot-help/ Tue, 05 Sep 2017 22:05:23 -0400 So. I have planned out quite a bit of plot line for my story, I’ve written three chapters, and am super attached to my characters. I have now realized that quite a bit of my plot is slightly cliche *cringes*

Does anyone have any ideas/tips for making plot-twists? I’ve been trying to think of plot-twists that are able to keep the general idea but…[Read more]

]]> 66dd940e1a2b91d2843117df57c154d9 Ryanna replied to the topic Weird novel idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/weird-novel-idea/page/3/#post-42855 Tue, 05 Sep 2017 21:50:35 -0400 @epicaddie2 That’s actually a really cool idea. I don’t know about a full length novel, but maybe a novella or short story? Maybe you could write it about a tree living through a certain time period, and somehow share to the reader the knowledge about that time period.

You could write it like each chapter is a certain day (maybe like a diary,…[Read more]

]]> 7f50d53f320fb383df221b91b69b5e89 Ryanna replied to the topic 1st person POV? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/1st-person-pov/#post-42274 Thu, 31 Aug 2017 01:30:14 -0400 Whoops… I tagged your name instead of your username – @belegteleri

]]> 8c87df653faee16b6e9a44502bdd05cf Ryanna replied to the topic 1st person POV? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/1st-person-pov/#post-42273 Thu, 31 Aug 2017 01:29:05 -0400 @daeus @epicaddie2 @tatiana Thanks for the tips! The ‘show don’t tell’ is certainly a good thing to always keep in mind. 😀

]]> 3f81d1b187e5516adc88bc437d46bf9c Ryanna started the topic 1st person POV? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/1st-person-pov/ Wed, 30 Aug 2017 15:27:03 -0400 Sooo – I rarely write in 1st person. I just don’t do it for unknown reasons. In my current WIP, I’ve decided to jump out of my comfort zone and try and write it in 1st person. It’s doing okay, but I’d like some tips as to how to write in that POV well? *shrug*

Also, I’m writing from two different characters POV, both in first person. Any tips on…[Read more]

]]> 5db266e9e5cb596d83239097c41009c1 Ryanna replied to the topic Book Recommendations in the forum Book Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/book-recommendations/page/2/#post-42167 Tue, 29 Aug 2017 15:02:04 -0400 Err – hmm, I’ve never read much historical FICTION (to be honest), but you could look up David McCullough. He’s got some great historical books. Also, off the topic of history/historical fiction, I just finished The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis and would definitely recommend that if you ever are in want of something to read!
@dragon-snapper…[Read more]

]]> 766a700b7b6f47a51574b3d8ad5047c9 Ryanna replied to the topic Some Feedback? in the forum Short Story Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/some-feedback/#post-41772 Fri, 25 Aug 2017 01:40:12 -0400 @Emily and @EpicAddie2 Thank you! I definitely will write it out again without the flashback. Also, Emily, I thought for some reason I could do the memory slightly like a narrator scene – but as I think about it that doesn’t make sense. *Shrug* Yes, 1st person is ‘I’ and 3rd person is ‘She’ 😀 (I think?)

]]> af6b06f874d6c1c2f22547021a3cf197 Ryanna started the topic Some Feedback? in the forum Short Story Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/some-feedback/ Thu, 24 Aug 2017 00:32:58 -0400 Hello, guys! So I’ve decided to share a super short story that I wrote a little while ago for critique/feedback. It’s not quite horror, but it’s slightly creepy I guess? *shrug* I get in creepy moods sometimes 😉 The backstory for this is that Jamie is a victim of a character of mine who brings to life everyones worst fears – kinda dark, I know. I…[Read more]

]]> 3122cc4ed76d493bdf27981be9bb09c1 Ryanna replied to the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/page/2/#post-41514 Tue, 22 Aug 2017 23:30:38 -0400 @Emma-Flournoy Haha! I get the feeling that INFP’s are the writer types – you gotta be introverted to be a writer 😀 Also, thank you!

]]> 430bc3f73656ad8fa931c253e5082af1 Ryanna replied to the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/page/2/#post-41350 Mon, 21 Aug 2017 17:18:32 -0400 @Emily-D Hai! So, I think I started a year or so ago. *shrug* I don’t really remember exactly when 😀

]]> 983cda7885ce898353ee750c2a15c56f Ryanna replied to the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/page/2/#post-41349 Mon, 21 Aug 2017 17:17:29 -0400 @Shannon Hi, and thank you! I love to write (duh) draw, read – so much reading – and study, I also like to spend time with friends but also have my alone time.. (introvert xD)

]]> 1e9d7c01f0bd55c114ae1a9f1a76db00 Ryanna replied to the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/page/2/#post-41348 Mon, 21 Aug 2017 17:15:39 -0400 @jane-maree Hello hello in return, *takes the pizza* and thank you! Also, yep – I’m an INFP. So we’re kinda close? 😀

]]> dbc31b6840587b514c70c5eec0c76924 Ryanna replied to the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/#post-41320 Mon, 21 Aug 2017 13:01:15 -0400 @Northerner Thanks! I have been writing only about half a year or a year (I don’t really remember when I started). I really love C.S Lewis, and I must confess I really enjoy Rick Riordan’s work. I honestly don’t have a favourite book – I’ll read anything you give me.

Haha, I write in the plain ol’ American style, quite boring.

]]> 10b6a509a7d73f9200f136196f616ad6 Ryanna replied to the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/#post-41319 Mon, 21 Aug 2017 12:55:40 -0400 @SeekJustice Hi, and thanks! I’ve done some writing, and I am currently working on a serious plot-line. I really love to write fantasy and fiction. 😀

]]> 1e5234945fc20c3ae54ac6eb2d213179 Ryanna started the topic Hiya, new person here! ^-^ in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hiya-new-person-here/ Sun, 20 Aug 2017 22:57:55 -0400 Hi! So, as the title says.. I’m new here – supah excited to be on the bestiest place on the internet!

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