@rolena-hatfield
Active 6 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?
But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.
But…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?
But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.
But…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield Hey, I really appreciate you. 😀 You always seem so happy and friendly no matter what you’re talking about, and I love seeing the emphasis you’ve put in some of your posts on honoring parents.
It’s really inspiring to see someone who acts with such lovely character all the time; sometimes convicting, too. 😛 Thanks so much for…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Ah, yes. I don’t think any of my smilies have that problem, but it’s a good point.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@Daeus I would never read a curse word from a script, whether play or book. Something you could consider (though it’s kinda minor) about whether or not to put the words in your writing is, what if someone were to make an audiobook or movie out of your story (pretend for a minute that’s likely to happen. 😛 Ya never know!), they’d have to say the…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
Hi friends,
I recently received edits from some friends of mine which caught my attention because they pointed out a few instances where some of my characters used coarse language (and asking me to remove them). It was only a few instances (maybe five or so), but I actually didn’t realize I had that many. Now, simply from a pragmatic perspective,…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
Hi friends,
I recently received edits from some friends of mine which caught my attention because they pointed out a few instances where some of my characters used coarse language (and asking me to remove them). It was only a few instances (maybe five or so), but I actually didn’t realize I had that many. Now, simply from a pragmatic perspective,…[Read more]
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Leumeister replied to the topic Hey Guys, Hi, um…. in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 12 months ago
Ah, I see. Scraps from life in a book. A scrapbook. Scrapbooking! 😛
XD LOL, I must be a pretty good baker then! XD
It’s mostly satire and comedy, but he has done a few serious books. His most famous stories are about Jeeves & Wooster, a butler and a rich upperclassman, respectively. His golfing short stories are great too.…[Read more]
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Leumeister replied to the topic Hey Guys, Hi, um…. in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 12 months ago
Ah, I see. Scraps from life in a book. A scrapbook. Scrapbooking! 😛
XD LOL, I must be a pretty good baker then! XD
It’s mostly satire and comedy, but he has done a few serious books. His most famous stories are about Jeeves & Wooster, a butler and a rich upperclassman, respectively.
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Leumeister replied to the topic Hey Guys, Hi, um…. in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 12 months ago
@rolena-hatfield: Hey, thanks for the welcome! 😀
Oh, okay. I was just amazed to see a forum with no activity for a year. XD
I do read a bit, although probably not as much as I should. 😛 I don’t think have a specific favorite book, but I’m currently reading P.G. Wodehouse at the moment, and I enjoy his books.
Baking and singing! 😀 I like…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Another Girl in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 12 months ago
@rolena-hatfield: Thank you! Oh, and thanks for the link, I’ll be sure to check it out!
As for violin, I have been taking lessons by the best teacher ever! (She’s actually from the States) We do it in her home (now, not at first) and we all have such a good time we usually go over half an hour. She’s picky, especially about me playing loud, but I…[Read more] -
Hannah R. replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Bingo. Edna Mode may be one of my all-time favorite Pixar characters.
“I have just met you, and I love you.”
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Mind of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@kate-flournoy This is kind of like, really cool to be on at the same time as someone else. It’s like I’m having a real conversation.
Everyone else, is there anyone in your family that you have based a character off of? My only one would be my cousin’s cousin, Hans, who is 15. He’s a guy who would try and jump a fence to see if he could and end…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Good Joust in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rolena-hatfield Ah. Unfortunately, I don’t know about that. 🙁
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Daeus replied to the topic A Good Joust in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rolena-hatfield I’m no expert in jousting, but I do think flails were sometimes used in jousts. The advantage of a flail is that it can whip around an opponent’s shield, but they are hard to wield and bad for defense. Anything specific you wanted to know?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Good Joust in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@Rolena-Hatfield you’re welcome. 🙂 It was either you could unhorse them with a blow to their shield or knock their helmet off. Unhorsing by the shield is most common and most convenient, as the jousting helmet is designed specifically to turn such blows. There is no flat surface to land a solid blow save for a tiny tip where all the slopes of the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Good Joust in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@Rolena-Hatfield you’re welcome. 🙂 It was either you could unhorse them or knock their helmet off. Unhorsing is most common and most convenient, as the jousting helmet is designed specifically to turn such blows. There is no flat surface to land a solid blow save for a tiny tip where all the slopes of the helmet come together just beneath the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Good Joust in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@Rolena-Hatfield I don’t know the answer to that specific question, though I suspect it very much depends on whether it was a formal joust (or even a royal joust) or a rougher, livelier joust hosted by a baron or some other ‘petty’ lord. ‘Country’ jousts were rough and probably a lot less organized. Royal jousts were merely for the show of it,…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic A Good Joust in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rolena-hatfield Have you ever seen The Sword in the Stone? It’s not entirely about jousting, but it has a scene or two with it. I know that squires keep all of the Knight’s items and anything they need. When a knight is dismounted, they move onto sword-fighting. That’s really all I know… Sorry I couldn’t be of more help.
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@Rolena-Hatfield I didn’t say something wrong did I? Of course an answer isn’t required, but I wondered… 😉
@emma-flournoy Oh Emma! For some reason I wasn’t notified of your first (really sweet 😉 ) comment! Of course you didn’t say something wrong! That’s very sweet of you to say and encouraging. Honoring my parents is sooooo important to me (as it should be) but very difficult to do sometimes. My posts have even been convicting to me. (I said this I…[Read more]
@Rolena-Hatfield Whew! I didn’t think there was anything there you would have taken offense at…certainly not. 😛 I thought it might have been malfunctioning notifications, but wasn’t sure. Mebbe I just should’ve tagged you again, instead of making you think I was afraid I’d offended you. *sheepish grin*
Anyway, you are so welcome; you’re such a…[Read more]