@rolena-hatfield
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel *wild applause*
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper do you mean on a scene to scene basis, like too much reacting, or just in general when you’re describing emotions? Just having one emotion indicator can help, like if your character is scared, only mentioning her rapid heartbeat rather than her wide eyes, her rapid heartbeat, and her clammy hands.
I think it’s still fine to have…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper Is this problem arising in the current story you’re working on, or all of them as a whole? Because child, I’m almost finished reading your book, and I honestly don’t know what you’re talking about. If anything, I was going to say that you need to focus more on the emotion, not less. Is this a response from beta-reader feedback, or…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Alrighty, guys…
I could use some help on this front. I’ve learned pretty well over the past few months how to show and not tell, but I actually am using that too much.
Don’t get me wrong. Always show over tell, but my problem is that I’m focusing way too much on the emotion. And Ike… Zelaya, they’ve all gone dismal.
How do I refocus my…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Out of season NaNoWriMo update in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!
Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂
Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?
Up to?
Up to much mischief, my dear friend…
I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.
I also…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD
Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.
Frozen Raspberry
Bland,
And the gray of night,
Shivering hands.
No light.
I couldn’t fight,
Tasteless.
I couldn’t write…
Numbness.
Why?
A question…
A question for the sky.
Of this evil infection?
Why the gray,
Does…[Read more]
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Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
*when you should be studying for your Philosophy exam but would rather laugh at other Keepers’ insane awesomeness*
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariella-newheart AHHHHHHHH!  I love her so much! My favorite part is her eyes. And the dress…absolutely perfect. 🙂
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
*dies*
You guys are nuts. In the best possible way, of course.
Ah’ll dae a poem. SOMEONE TAG ME AND GIVE ME A TOPIC!
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Ah, yes. I just finished a 15 page research paper on Robert E. Lee and I think I fried my creativity circuits.
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I’m here, everyone! Working on my roleplay! Anyone else writing or procrastinating? @dekreel @seekjustice @clairc @jane-maree @rochellaine @ariella-newheart
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!! I can’t believe I missed this when it came out! TOP NOTCH!!!
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel OH, I will definitely be praying for you!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariella-newheart Oh! My story isn’t medieval, but Ilea is from another world so however you’re doing her outfit is great! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Calling All Artists!!!!!!!!!!!!! in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@nicolerivers03 Looks like @warrenluther04 and @notawriter have got ya covered. And *whispers* I wouldn’t have been able to draw him well anyway… 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@salome01w4g Hallelujah!!!! Praise the Lord. 🙂
@devastate-lasting Awwww…sure thing!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariella-newheart YAY!!! Glad you like it.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Me too. Catch you later!
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