Rolena Hatfield

@raevynstar
I think you could do one of two things. You could go with what @daeus said and make her completely confident in herself…or you could make her doubt herself and her abilities. Maybe she’s really insecure and doesn’t quite know who she is. Anyway, just some thoughts.

@Daeus yep. Nailed it.

@Emily
I love that quote…and the lighthouse. 🙂

Kay, perfect! Actually going to choir right now, so i wouldn’t have been able to read your response anyway. @xonos-darkgrate

Hey @xonos-darkgrate want to take a look? Don’t worry, there is *lots* of intrigue and other stuff like that. 😉

@daeus Yeah. What they said. 😉

Btw, I love the book. I’ve gotten maybe 6 chapters through? I don’t really keep track of chapters…

@jess-penrose

Well, the version of a synopsis I know is a maximum of 10 page summary of a book that describes the plot, characters, message, world and the writer’s thoughts. Soooo… I assume these are slightly different things in Australia. That’s all.

That’s my definition of a synposis too…I mean, that’s a good reason for writer’s to hate…[Read more]

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀

I’m confused as well. And yes, @xonos-darkgrate Cinnar would love it here. Probably Julie Martin/Stanley too, what with the unicorns and such.

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.

*scowls at technology in general* Sorry guys… if any of you have followed the link and been horribly confused, I tried to fix something backstage because one of my pages was acting up and I think I just made it worse. I’ll try to get it back up and organized as soon as possible.

@rolena-hatfield wellll… *glances around cautiously*
Okay, yes. Apparently my secret is out. I do have a blog. I’ve had it for a while; I just haven’t been able to be active on it yet. I went ahead and set it up for graphic design purposes, but I’m waiting to finish up the very lastest of my last extracurricular school projects before I start…[Read more]

@emily That sunset picture is pretty.

@rolena-hatfield I have a blog: http://www.thetinytealtypewriter.com Thanks for giving me the opportunity to share it. 😊

@catwing Thanks! These are so fun to make!
@salome01w4g Wow, nice!
@shannon Not horrible at all! 🙂 Love it!

@shannon Ooh! Palm trees! Where does this story take place? 🙂

@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛

@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!