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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Haha. I have phases where I fall in love and out of love with my own projects. I’ve been rereading what I’ve written so far for my WIP to encourage myself to push forward. 😛
Oh by the way, there are some questions I asked you in response to your comments in my doc. Some of them are still bothering me especially the one with regard…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Yeah…
Oh, right. 😛
Oh, my. Isn’t there a whole month where they fast but feast at night?@dekreel Pretty good. I’m going over some blog things now. What is your favorite type of blog post? Life, writing article, talking about books, book excepts, tags, pictures, polls/quizs? (When I said Saturday I would post I meant August 4,…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Hey hey! That’s fine. 😉 I’m at the part where Chessy is talking to Kai.
I’m very curious about this “boy…” *smirks* How’s your poison ivy doing, by the way? Any better?
Random-ish question: Would you disbelief a jackalope?
@catwing Hullo! Good to see ya! How are you doing?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
OK I’ve put in my suggestions in the doc.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Yes. But you may want to look up the details. 😉
That is strange. I didn’t notice that… I have read some of those passages before but I haven’t thought about it. If I had to guess without doing any research I would say, the Pharisees or Sadducees made up some rule, like you can only walk so many miles on the Sabbath. It could be…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy @catwing @rochellaine @seekjustice @whoever
Oy! I’m beta-reading again!
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine @valtmy I’m here doing a bit of writing.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t say you didn’t give enough info. I understood the “going to be late” thing was something that the reader doesn’t need to know now. It’s just jarring that this guy doesn’t know who Bathshua is but this other guy with him somehow does so I think an explanation is needed for that.
Sure I’ll be happy to take a look at your…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey. Just trying to get the motivation to start 😛
I’ve replied to your replies to my comments in your doc. Are there any other questions you want to ask me?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel
I’m here now.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine I see.
They did prayer shawls back then. They’re basically shawls that women wore on their head when they prayed. I think they have tassels on the ends and something in Hebrew in a corner. You may have to look it up, because my info right now is spotty (it’s been a while). But now you know about them and can research. 😛
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine I see.
They did prayer shawls back then. They’re basically shawls that women wore on their head when they prayed. I think they have tassels on the ends and something in hebrew in a corner. You may have to look it up, because my info right now is spotty (it’s been a while). But now you know about them. -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine you’re welcome.
I know some about Hebrew culture so hopefully I can spot something if you mess up. 😉
Do you know about prayer shawls, the special stick they use to keep their place while reading the Bible (I can’t remember what it’s called right now), or what Shalom means? I can tell you a little bit if you don’t and want to.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice In that case I should read that part soon. XD
I actually finished a long time ago, and I’ve been passing the time binge-reading all the comments for the KPA.
I didn’t put periods after some of my sentences and it DRIVES… ME… CRAZY!!!!!
Anyway, I think I’ll sign off now. Good to see you!
Byeeee, @rochellaine! you’ve probably…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
And I agree with Valtmy on the subject of your question. Its hard to tell whether its too obvious or not because we don’t know what the point of it is. However, it is very obvious. Its just about whether you want it to be obvious or not.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel @rochellaine I’m here now, polishing up my blog post for today.
Dekreel, please don’t be offended, but my sister just called you a fox. I know you’re sensitive to be called a wolf, but how do you feel about being a fox?
I just got to the part where Sapphire is trying to take Kai to the hospital with the help of Rain and another boy.
😀 I…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Yeah, that one. XD
I just got to the part where Sapphire is trying to take Kai to the hospital with the help of Rain and another boy.
Ahhhh, the life of a writer…
Yeah, definitely.
Sooooo…. *tries to think of something to say*
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Ooooh, poison ivy. What’s that like? I’ve never had it before.
I’m beta-reading Chelsea’s book. What are you up to?
Oh yeah, you said a long time ago that you would give an explanation or something considering your MBTI. If you don’t want to do that with one hand, that’s fine. 🙂
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel You should. 😉
I’m not beta-reading @seekjustice book. I am waiting for her to send it out. Waiting. 🙂 (But I’m working my book some. ;P )
I got distracted and decided to take a summer break. I can’t remember if it was the short story contest at my library or the 4th of July parade that distracted me… Also I’m thinking about getting…[Read more]
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