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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine 😀 Hi 😀
XD Thanks. The way its turning out is kind of funny, because Swiggy is hopelessly melodramatic about his desire… -
Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I moved that paragraph up and changed it a wee bit.
Also, the other POV problem. It was originally Aldred’s POV, but I tried to change it to Casse’s. When I separated out that section I forgot to change it back to his. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello My name is in the forum Sci-Fi 8 years, 7 months ago
@aedesia Welcome to Kingdom Pen! 😀
@dekreel Nope. Never been sued. Though I should be. *grins* @rochellaine *looks at you* *promptly melts a chair*
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I’m just leaving it at that. You’ll have to keep reading to find out. Let’s just say that he should take the nickname “Noble”. For this case, at least…
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Catwing replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart Indeed it is a writer’s corner. *is probably way too happy she isn’t the only one who made that typo in the title*
I’m working on Firebird.
*blows noiseous horn* @daughteroftheking @dragon-snapper @aislinn-mollisong @salome01w4g @epicaddie2 @rochellaine @xonos-darkgrate @shannon @sam-kowal -
Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you so much for those comments! I made a few wording changes and added the breaks. (plus fixed a few typos I missed the other times I tried rereading) 🙂
And you’re right. She’s not disapproving the bribe. She’s just pointing out a bit of irony. I added a sentence that’ll hopefully make that a wee bit more clear. Plus, it adds…[Read more]
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @salome01w4g I love the Boy Colonel, as well as the other two. XD. I think Chester might be my favorite though. And Edmund. Wow. I think he deserves a high ranking. *cries* Especially that ending.
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I think this new link will work. If not, let me know and I’ll try a different link.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DtJUfCBJBk-beHpCIdVAMIw5sN3w4D-qNxRIFVfxw4o/edit?usp=sharing
Casse has only lived in cities or towns for most of her life, so she hasn’t had a lot of experience climbing trees. She can climb onto house roofs quite…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine YAY! That is true, free stories are awesome!
Okay, that would be great too!
Okay, thanks for the advice! (Info? Instructions? :D)
Okay. (Wow. I say that too much…) 🙂
Thanks!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic What's the best book you've read recently? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sage-g I’ll have to check out Book of a Thousand Days. Kindle is wonderful!
@ashlyvye Ohhh! You really like the Mistborn Trilogy!. 😉 I’ll have to find and read them!
@rochellaine HHmm… I like old romance novels! I’ll have to read those too before you *threateningly* throw those GLH books at me!
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I made some changes that hopefully fixed the head-hopping problem. Could you take a look and tell me what you think?
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Hannah replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Same problem other than the twins are awesome (in the other 2 books)
Ikr Dev is the older brother I don’t but wish I had 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Informal Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine No, I appreciated your answer.
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Hannah replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine ahh our endearing Colonel Nobody. 🙂
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Hannah replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
I just re-read the Viking Quest Series, Mikkel 100% !! 😛
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Really? People want to read it? 😀 😀 😀 Before you want to read it, do you know what it’s about? I have my basic ideas jotted down in “Norse Mythology Short Story”, a forum topic by me. Sooo…. um…yep.
Um, I’m planning on posting it in the forum “Norse Mythology Short Story” (by me) once I figure out how to get the shareable link…[Read more]
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Bella B. replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine    I don’t actually watch much DC, but I think I will soon. I’m really excited to see the Flash. My friend really likes the Flash (err, I have a friend who has a friend that’s obsessed with Flash and the DC universe) and showed me a picture (for writing reasons) of the evil Flash phasing his hand into someone’s body and squash…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Hi there! I’m readin’ my history book 😐 anyone on to join me?
@warrenluther04 @rochellaine @dekreel @dragon-snapper @mariposa @skredder @sam-kowal @clairec
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Hello My name is in the forum Sci-Fi 8 years, 7 months ago
@Rochellaine
Confusing people is my 2nd occupation! 😀
Sadly neither of my jobs pay well. Or ..y’know at all. -
Jenna Terese replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@skreeder ooh, that’s awsome! I love the colors! 😊
@rochellaine hmm, okay, thanks for telling me 👍
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