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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @jenali @epicaddie2 @the-real-kapeefer
Thank you all! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 7 months ago
@waterlily @rochellaine @skredder @ingridrd @anyone
Peri can be a nickname, right? What are some names that can have a nickname of Peri?
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @livgiordano Amen. Amen. Amen.
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Alia replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine, yeah, it still didnt work. I am mentally screaming right now. but I have to do some school so I’ll have to write it again later
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Alia replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing, so, I wrote a very long answer, only to have it disappear and KP log me out. I don’t have time to rewrite it right now, but I will try to get it to you.
@rochellaine, I agree with both of your posts
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MNValentine started the topic Best Cover Designs in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
So I’m not looking for cover design tips, I’ve already read the whole internet on that topic 🙂 But I want to hear what covers you all think are well designed – fiction, nonfiction, I really don’t care, I just want to know what you think looks good!!
@dekreel @that_writer_girl_99 @sam-kowal @daeus @valtmy @rochellaine @ashlyvye @dragon-snapper…[Read more]
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Hannah replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing … I think if I successfully create a poem from that I will have set a record. 😂……….. This is gonna be tough. 😬
@rochellaine haha yeah.. hmm… Wellll… It’ll probably a few days just for warning. 😂
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Grace H. replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
I’m super super sorry for the confusion. This is only the beginning of the poem, not it in its entirety. I haven’t a title for it yet, but its about friendship and eventually about saying goodbye.
@dekreel I’m glad you like it!
@rochellaine Yes, I should probably read it out loud and see how it flows. And I almost put “relating across worlds”,…[Read more]
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Thanks for tagging me! I’m also an MK 🙂
@rochellaine covered a lot of my pet peeves. I personally have struggled a *lot* with being thrown into a whole new culture, and that was manifested by bitterness at God and parents. Even after I repented of that, it’s still something I struggle with, even two years later.
Two stereotypes that I…[Read more]
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Grace H. replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing A lot like what @rochellaine said, that MK’s might not struggle with bitterness, especially if they’ve been in this situation for basically their entire lives. I know I think my situation is normal (for me), and I wouldn’t change as this is what I’ve grown up with. As a result of living overseas, I’m not terribly picky about food or…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @ethryndal @winter-rose
@salome01w4g @aislin-mollisong @xonos-darkgrate @shannon @emily
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.
To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.
Maybe, you could…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
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Grace H. replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine These poems are hilarious. Thanks for starting this! 😀 😀 😀
I screeched at Stan
Like a mother bear
But all he said was “Well There
Please keep your hair
I put that hole in your blanket
Now I go for a chair”
@sam-kowal @dragon-snapper NO ONE HAS MENTIONED how funny “Now I go for a chair” is. That is most definitely the best par…[Read more]
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Grace H. started the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Hey everyone,
I wrote a poem today for my writing class, and its free verse, but sort of structured. Here are the first two stanzas:
What can ever substitute
for shushed hysterics in the wee hours of the morning
those conspiratorial smiles across the hallway
and those times when nothing need be said — the silence
only broken by taps and…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Compilations of some of my favorite screenshots of @aratrea and @the-real-kapeefer


@sierra-r @epicaddie2 @rochellaine @corissa-maiden-of-praise @dragon-snapper @anyone
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
The Gif Hiders
Part Two: The Bird and her Cake
The Kingdom of Pen did grow weirder and weirder for Jenna, but only gradually. After a few days, ever since she had come, she had met some centaurs, a mermaid, another dragon, a tiger, and even a droid. But the weirdness didn’t exactly just rocket into the air until about three weeks after she had f…[Read more]
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itisastarrynight replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I enjoyed this a lot 🙂 Good job!
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