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Snapper replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @alia *glances at the other wall* *Blows a puff of small fflame at it*
*offers the rest of the walls to @dekreel as she goes off to find a stack of chairs*
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Joy replied to the topic You Know You're a Kapeefer When… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine X’D
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Lunar Inklings replied to the topic *waves* hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine I see. I would think they would taste something like a sweet potato
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Lunar Inklings replied to the topic *waves* hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel I haven’t listened to Halo in a while so I don’t remember the ones I like. I like any of the cars or planes soundtracks (Pixar)
@rochellaine I had no clue there was such a thing as potato-squash berries
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Snapper replied to the topic You Know You're a Kapeefer When… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine XD XD That’s awesome.
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine X’D
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Eight: Up a Tree
Having just hidden a Star Trek GIF, Skredder suddenly lifted her head. “Earthquake,” she simply said.
Everyone looked at her. “What?” said Valentine.
“Earthquake! An earthquake’s coming!” Skredder repeated.
“She’s right! I feel it, too!” called Catwing from a tree branch.
“But earth…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine XD I’m not particularly refined at poetry, so to me, it seems pretty great. If I think of any improvements, I’ll post them
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
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@rochellaine. Well, sometimes my cousins call me Sylvester, so maybe you are calling me.;) -
Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine I think dragons might still exist some places on the earth, and I do believe that there used to be lots of them. But dragons are viewed kind of like unicorns are. Maybe there were unicorns as well? 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:
“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀
The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine By the way, what is with “Sylvester!” if you dont mind me asking?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Maybe if its a serious poem, use a fear of something that isnt as fantasized as dragons are. If its a comical poem, then use whatever imaginary creatures you can find. Even still, I love it! Its an awesome poem. Dont take my advice because I said so, because I still have tons to learn!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper I’m
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Wow, great job. It’s inspiring, and adding dragons always is great 😀
Because of the dragons, I find it almost somewhat comical in nature still; it gives it a certain lightness which helps balance the introspective side.
The comparison of facing your fears to facing dragons is very fitting, too.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine I like it! Although its kind of in between serious and comical at the same time. Thanks for sharing!
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jessi-Rae @dragon-snapper @dekreel @jenwriter17 @rochellaine
@seekjustice @ethryndal @perfectfifths @daughteroftheking
*flys in through the window wearing a trench coat* Tonight I’m going to crack this book open wide! It’s been giving me some trouble. *holds up portable interrogation lamp*
*pulls up a box and sits down*
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice and @anyone-I-forgot
Since my mom is lactose intolerant, we drink goat milk all the time. Also A-2 milk more recently. I actually prefer goat milk to cow milk…I’m weird like that. 😛
By the way, @dekreel , amazing job! *thumbs up*
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Alia replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
first off, I love it when fandoms over take topics. (yes auto correct, fandoms is a word…)
@perfectfifths, let’s see,
Mira would rather be on the brute squad, and she would gag at all three of the other ones.
Delmira (I just realized how similar their names are, good thing their in different books) would be the brute squad, and change the…[Read more]
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