Rochellaine

@rochellaine I am crazy about S&S!  Yeah, we talked about this before!  I have four or five of thier soundtracks.  Have you guys seen Jesus???  I hope we can see Samson, but since we are moving I don’t know if we will.  Our grandparents have taken us to see Moses and Th Miracle of Christmas.  Both were amazing!!!

@rochellaine Completley!  Most all my CDs are from musicals and S&S because its the best music I can find.

@rochellaine yeah, my dad is tired of me changing the scenes. Me too. XP bye!

Its a lot of fun, because I can make up so much of it while still having guidelines.  Like the people are really a mix of mongolian, russian, arab, and the tribes by the Caspian like the Rebu.  @rochellaine @catwing

@rochellaine Hi! I am figuring out some sub plots for my story “My Blood for Yours”.  It is set in what is modern Kazakhstan during 1200-1300ish B.C. and the time of the judges in Israel.  The land was mostly waring nomads,and I am making a crazy story out of some feuding tribes.  And bringing God into it.  I have a made up character named Jet…[Read more]

@rochellaine Slowly… Trying to show more. But I may end up changing this scene.
@ariel-ashira Welcome!

@rochellaine@ catwing I am writing right now too, though I don’t know how long.

@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
I’m here editing, earlier than usual. 🙂

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@rochellaine Right. 🙂  And as I dont have a set time each day right now when I write, I can’t say when I will or won’t be on here.  Thanks!

@rochellaine Ahh, just letting you know I am haunting this topic and I might comment occasionaly.

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

I should probably get lunch too. Bye!

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

How’s your writing going?

Ah, see ya! @rochellaine

And I actually must be heading off for lunch now. @seekjustice but I should be back soonish.

@jess-penrose 🙂

@catwing I have trouble with showing not telling as well, so much of my editing involves fixing it! You are not alone in this struggle!

@Rochellaine i don’t think we were supposed to, but Jess did and I liked my last line so I did too!

I hope your confusion lessens some time soon 🙂

@catwing Oh yay! I’ll happily look through it again! Hmm… It could be good. Have I mentioned anything about passive voice? And goodnight!

@rochellaine Hahaha, no clue. I just tend to whenever I war with my cousin. So, she may have invented that, or maybe she got it from somewhere else… but I always tend to do it anyway ‘cos it can be fun to read them.

@jess-penrose Yeah, I have trouble showing, not telling. 🙁
Maybe after I go through all these and get the revised doc to you. I’m revising it in a different doc. 🙂
Just wondering, did you think I needed to develop the characters more?

@rochellaine @seekjustice I have to go to bed. Good night.

@jess-penrose

My last line was:

above the din came Errol’s voice, but I could not distinguish his words from the rest of the chaos.

your last line is very interesting too 😉

@Rochellaine

Sorry, you’ll thank me one day though (or maybe not)

@rochellaine Woah! You must be a fast writer! 447 is my top record for a ten minute word war.