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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Yeah, it does sound a bit shifty 😛 I’ll definitely check it out if you want me too (I love reading thoughts. I’m super into dialogue, as you’ve probably noticed, even if it’s just a character debating with themselves).
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Drat it, my reply didn’t post.
Basically, what I was saying was this:
I was going to add a section in the bits where Chessy chats to Justice’s grandfather with him mentioning his other no good grandson, and then I realised that that wouldn’t work because Zac isn’t his grandson. There are a few differences between Kendall and Zac,…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice
Glad that this may come in handy at some point, even if not right now.@rochellaine Hmm… I’d be willing to say yes, it would still apply to someone slim. (Note: All research on these topics has been ethical and no injuries were caused by me or were prentable by me) I purely assume this because my siblings are type one…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice Just thinking, on this conversation about hungry after not eating and things, after about 3-7 days the body adjusts to not eating and starts burning fat instead. This would leave a person lethargic and very susceptible to illness, but after their body reaches this point it doesn’t tend to feel hunger. (No clue if that is…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Oh well, you’re better safe than sorry on the internet. 😀
Cool! When are you going to put up your next part?
My sister commented that Justice having to deal with Zac was like dealing with Kendall all over again, but no, you haven’t mentioned it. What do you think about their connection?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I meant a sign like this one:

My brother saw it and goes “Hey, there’s Uncle Bill!”
Yeah, I’ve done similar things before, like I was once sick for a weeks and ate barely anything and lost a whole lot of weight, and I’ve had trouble since then if I don’t eat regularly I get unwell and usually very dizzy.
The IV would definitely…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Uncle Bill is famous yes 😀 He’s even got his picture on a post out in Kangaroo Valley 🙂
Okay, so what I was thinking (as I was trying not to fall off a cliff) was that irrationality is a symptom of heat exhaustion/stroke, so maybe Uncle Bill tells her to walk back to the road and try to flag down a car, so she does, but when she…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Haha, I won’t let Connor die. He’s too precious. *Wraps up in blankets*
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Yes, I did 😀 It was very nice!
(Also, congratulations to Uncle Bill! Um…you want to hear a funny story about Uncle Bill? We went hiking on Wednesday, along an escarpment with no fence, but I was explaining to my sister about your story and the problem I was trying to work out about why Chara would walk along the road–which I…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice Ack sorry! The internet crashed, but I’m back now.
Oooooh, nice snippet!
Yes, I write in 1st person present tense, but I’ve also done 1st person past and 3rd person past. I find it easier to write this way actually, it makes me feel more connected, and then I could just make them drop dead at any given point. xP But I…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, I’m back here now!
Thanks, it went really well and all the old people really loved it 😀 I do Scottish Highland dancing (Sword dancing, you know 🙂 ) I love writing at the library. It’s so quiet with no siblings 😀
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Oh well! As long as you’re still enjoying the writing. And often it is hard to get back into something after a longish break. *nodnod*
My characters… are kinda in shock? Well, Connor is. And he is aware of it and trying to ignore everything and agh. *pats him*
Laura failed, and now it is left to me.
The door opens at the slight…
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Wellllll, I’ve finished all I technically need to for Camp NaNo, but I’m only about a third of the way through. *flops* My main worry is that this book seems to be looking like it will be reaching the 150k mark before edits.
How about you?
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Heyo! I am back and yeah. Writing sounds like a plan!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice just hopped over real quick to say WELCOME BACK! 😀
I hope your dance performance goes well. What kind of dance do you do? Ah, yes, writing at the library. Isn’t it nice to write somewhere where it is for the most part quiet? 😉
@rochellaine Oh, and I hope your time at the conference goes well too 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I missed you and all our crazy conversations and debates too. 🙂
Unfortunately I’m just about to go to town to do a dance performance at the nursing home, but I should get some writing time at the library so I’ll tag you when I’m back and we might be able to have a word war 😉
I think you mentioned me several times, so rest assured 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine sorry, i have to go now 🙁 I hope your writing goes well.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
HELLLOOOOO! I am back! And I’m writing 😀
(also, I’m gratified to read over several pages worth of conversations that went on while I was away and to see my name mentioned with great regularity. 😀 )
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Hi! I’m only gonna be on a few more minutes though….
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @ingridrd @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira Anyone wanna write with me? I’m on for a little bit.
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