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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Sorry for the late reply, I was out all day yesterday and have only just got back from church now.
Basically, I fixed most of the things you pointed out Valtmy, in the second draft and I fixed it quite simply. Unfortunately though, I don’t know what to do with character of Mathias. :/
I agree with pretty much everything you…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine yeah that was Gideon that said that. 😀 that was funny!
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
OK it’s good that that’s going to be fixed in the next draft. 😀
I read your fanfics! They are really sweet and cute! 😊
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
As I have said, I am fine with the sparing of Mathias. The contrived resolution I am speaking of is the resolution to the Caderousse-Chessy conflict which is resolved with Caderousse, much like Javert, letting Chessy go and committing suicide later. In the original Les Mis, this was a fitting and sufficient resolution because of…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 I rode English before I moved last year, but now I ride Western. It’s different. 😉 There were a lot of months in between moving and finding this place. I think I’m back though.
And we don’t just learn riding, we learn about the horses so that’s fun. (Since I hope to have a horse some day) -
Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@catwing Glad it went well. Sorry about the sunburn and things though. 🙁
Do you ride western or english? I ride english, and jump some too. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Oh yes, I love his voice! I really like deep voices. 🙂
I really like “Bless Yore Beautiful Hide” too. Maybe that’s my favorite 😉
I also liked Gideon, forgot to mention him.
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Catwing replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@Daughteroftheking @jenwriter17
It went pretty well, not perfect but we made it. At one point some people were cheering the name of our club (they did this for everyone as they passed them) which has the name of one of the horses in it, so he kinda backed up and spooked a little bit. They stopped then so everyone was fine. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I really like Millie! A favorite song…that…that will take some time to decide. 😉
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! I’ll read them later. 😀
Oh no, not really. I’ll go check the comments out later if I have the time.
I was not expecting a full blown Valjean-Javert conflict. But Chessy (along with her father) is sort of like Valjean with the unjust hard labour and all that. To me, SeekJustice is writing this from a ‘Valjean’ perspective…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I’m not writing right now, I just wanted to tell you that I watched Seven Brides for Seven Brothers last night. I really liked it! 😀 Especially the part where they’re dancing at the barn raising 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey. Just dropping by to let you know that I’ve finished reading both SFI and WIIE. 🙂 I didn’t put in any comments because I know you’re already in the process of editing. I’m not sure what sort of feedback you’re looking for so I’ll just share with you my general thoughts.
Overall I quite like both of them. Retellings are usually…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Fair enough. I’m just trying to finish off a blog post so I can schedule it for tomorrow, since I’m going to be aware for most of tomorrow.
Editing is pretty good! I’m hoping to finish Part 3 tomorrow 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I’ve just arrived but I probably will only be around for half an hour, then I’ve got dancing. How’s your story going now?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Yep. Still here. Still not-working-on-my-WIP.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
All right, I’ll look out for those ones then 😀
Now, I must go for breakfast. I may see you later though, I’m not sure. 🙂 Bye!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Ah yes. I’ve done that before. 🙂
True that. It’s always much easier to keep going than to start 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I’m having internet trouble, so my post isn’t posting, which is a tad annoying.
Anyway, yes, that’s the great thing about having more than one WIP, which isn’t a thing I really get because I get so fixated on working on one thing at a time, rather than hopping around.
I’m not sure if Mozart usually wrote his own words, but…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I wasn’t intending to wake up so early! My sleep was not going very well so I figured I might as well come back on here.
Ah well. If physics ever taught man anything, it is that greater force is required to start a motion than continue it.
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