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@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, @rochellaine anyone on?

@jenwriter17, it looks great. can’t wait to see what you post

@kaya-young Aw, thank you! <3 😀

my site was hosted by Bluehost, but I made it through WordPress.

@jenwriter17  Oh wow! I love it!

Your picture is great. You are so pretty! 🙂

What did you use to make your website?

@gh24682468999 Oh really? It’s not supposed to say that…

can you just try typing http://www.jennaterese.com into your search engine? not sure why it’s saying that…

and signing out

@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, anyone on?

@catwing I ride English, and occasionally riding Western feels really weird. 😉

I hope to have a horse one day too! 😀 What breed do you like? I really like thoroughbreds and quarter horses.

@rochellaine

Well, that would have been clever if she could have got it to work. 🙂

Anyway I’m going to go to bed now because *gasp* its 10:15 I’ll talk tomorrow…or the day after or whatever 😛

@rochellaine

Well, hopefully I would. 🙂 I like that the leave the ending open to interpretation though, even if its kind of maddening 😛 I’m surprised that she didn’t show him the tiger door and then throw herself in to die with him in some tragic Romeo and Juliet type thing.

Which I’m glad didn’t happen, just so you know.

Okay, I’ll look it…[Read more]

@Rochellaine

I just love the whole idea of it. I’m currently reading the plot of the original short story 😛

Its funny because the sermon we were watching as I read the synopsis was about relationships between men and women, particularly dating, so it was very applicable 😀

@rochellaine

No I haven’t heard of him, this speaker is Louie Giglio from Passion Church in Atlanta. Have you heard of him?

I’m just looking at the synopsis. It looks pretty cool, especially the second story so far.

@rochellaine

I’m awake and watching a sermon with mg parents.

No I haven’t. I’ll look it up.

@valtmy

Never mind 🙂 People often point out my own misinterpretations of my own writing. At least you can be excused for mixing up minor details 😛

Well, originally he was there to get around the plot hole in Les Mis–the fact that no one recognised Javert until it was convenient, even though there were three people at least who should have…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Oh. I must have been dozing off when I read that part 😂

But my suggestions for Mathias are the same. Figure out what his motivations are, maybe think about how his relationship with his superior officer Caderousse and his fellow soldiers are etc. So far to me Mathias feels rather unnecessary. He seems to be there just to show that…[Read more]

@valtmy

That’s good! I hope things make more sense in the second draft.

Well…that wasn’t Mathias who let them go. That was one of the wharf men.

Observe (that word makes me feel smart, you see):

Instead I met the eyes of a bearded man who looked even more startled than I did. His mouth was open, and he was staring down at Rain and I…

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@seekjustice

Hey. Great to know that they are going to be fixed! I’m really looking forward to reading your second draft now! 😊

For Mathias, I guess you can start by thinking up of a believable motivation for him much like Caderousse. Why is he serving in an immoral legal system? Why did he let Chessy and Rain go instead of reporting them to C…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool! I’ll see if I can get it to post now!

Ooh what soundtrack?