Rochellaine

@valtmy  @catwing  @rochellaine  @seekjustice  @whoever

Oy! I’m beta-reading again!

@rochellaine @valtmy I’m here doing a bit of writing.

@rochellaine

I didn’t say you didn’t give enough info. I understood the “going to be late” thing was something that the reader doesn’t need to know now. It’s just jarring that this guy doesn’t know who Bathshua is but this other guy with him somehow does so I think an explanation is needed for that.

Sure I’ll be happy to take a look at your…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hey. Just trying to get the motivation to start 😛

I’ve replied to your replies to my comments in your doc. Are there any other questions you want to ask me?

@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel

I’m here now.

@rochellaine I see.
They did prayer shawls back then. They’re basically shawls that women wore on their head when they prayed. I think they have tassels on the ends and something in Hebrew in a corner. You may have to look it up, because my info right now is spotty (it’s been a while). But now you know about them and can research. 😛
That sounds good.

@rochellaine I see.
They did prayer shawls back then. They’re basically shawls that women wore on their head when they prayed. I think they have tassels on the ends and something in hebrew in a corner. You may have to look it up, because my info right now is spotty (it’s been a while). But now you know about them.

@rochellaine you’re welcome.
I know some about Hebrew culture so hopefully I can spot something if you mess up. 😉
Do you know about prayer shawls, the special stick they use to keep their place while reading the Bible (I can’t remember what it’s called right now), or what Shalom means? I can tell you a little bit if you don’t and want to.
Have…[Read more]

@dekreel

Okay bye!

…maybe @rochellaine has fallen asleep again!

@seekjustice  In that case I should read that part soon. XD

I actually finished a long time ago, and I’ve been passing the time binge-reading all the comments for the KPA.

I didn’t put periods after some of my sentences and it DRIVES… ME… CRAZY!!!!!

Anyway, I think I’ll sign off now. Good to see you!

Byeeee, @rochellaine! you’ve probably…[Read more]

@dekreel

😛

No, you aren’t supposed to know, but everyone else does know and also know that I am rather obsessed with him. In fact, that he is my favourite character.

@seekjustice  I mean, if your sister didn’t know I’m not a fox, then that’s fine. XD Just be sure she doesn’t KEEP calling me a fox. 😉

I’m sorry, am I supposed to know who he is? It’s hard to keep track of characters…

@rochellaine

And I agree with Valtmy on the subject of your question. Its hard to tell whether its too obvious or not because we don’t know what the point of it is. However, it is very obvious. Its just about whether you want it to be obvious or not.

@dekreel @rochellaine I’m here now, polishing up my blog post for today.

Dekreel, please don’t be offended, but my sister just called you a fox. I know you’re sensitive to be called a wolf, but how do you feel about being a fox?

I just got to the part where Sapphire is trying to take Kai to the hospital with the help of Rain and another boy.

😀 I…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Yeah, that one. XD

I just got to the part where Sapphire is trying to take Kai to the hospital with the help of Rain and another boy.

Ahhhh, the life of a writer…

Yeah, definitely.

Sooooo…. *tries to think of something to say*

@rochellaine  Ooooh, poison ivy. What’s that like? I’ve never had it before.

I’m beta-reading Chelsea’s book. What are you up to?

Oh yeah, you said a long time ago that you would give an explanation or something considering your MBTI. If you don’t want to do that with one hand, that’s fine. 🙂

@catwing  Fair enough. Umm… No suggestions off the top of my head. 🙂

I don’t have a blog. I DESPERATELY want one though.

@dekreel You should. 😉

I’m not beta-reading @seekjustice book. I am waiting for her to send it out. Waiting. 🙂 (But I’m working my book some. ;P )

I got distracted and decided to take a summer break. I can’t remember if it was the short story contest at my library or the 4th of July parade that distracted me… Also I’m thinking about getting…[Read more]

@valtmy  That’s all right. Good night!

@rochellaine  Hello! Yeah, yeah, I miss you, too. 😉

How are you doing? Sorry I disappeared last time. I sorta drifted off.

@rochellaine

Hey. Not sure when you’ll be back but I’ll put my answer to your first question here before I go:

1. You found out Yishay very quickly. Would it be more interesting if it were not so obvious, or is it fine as it is? If I had him just go to his house and wait for Bathshua would that make it harder to figure out? But that seems quite…[Read more]