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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Yep. It was funny but I agree that it’s a little too mean (even given the sort of person my MC’s brother is) and my MC should be trying to come across as a proper lady at that moment so insulting a family member like that does not fit with the image.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I’ll be here before work.
Rochellaine, thanks for your comments in my doc. I’ve replied so you can go take a look. I’ve decided to remove that part with my MC’s brother. The whole issue with that is that my MC and her brother are really, really not supposed to be looked up to by the readers anyway so I thought that that…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy @dekreel @jenwriter17 @rochellaine @alia @catwing
Anyone around?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Haha does that mean I have a distinctive writing style? Or that my stories are too similar in inspiration and tone?
I think QOD and ROF will end being similar in tone but the stories will be very different. QOD features a female MC who loves romance and whose story is more of one of drama and personal growth. ROF will feature a male…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Hopefully inspiration will kick in soon…
Can you remind me one more time about all the positions on the Kingdom now? I know SeekJustice is the queen… Or something.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine (Sorry it took so long to respond. I’m a little distracted.)
Fair enough…
Do you think I should write another KPA? A shorter one? XD
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Oh. My other question had to do with the “When she did” line which you apparently have no idea how to rephrase too. 😛
For my MC’s age… I don’t think I am going to change it. But I think I would insert a line somewhere saying that the actual marriage is not going to take place until years later (sigh, catering to the delicate…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy I’m glad your writing is going well!! 😀 😀
(I’m not trying to imply that I’m glad you keep disappearing, by the way… XD)
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine I’m pretty sure I’m on the second draft. Why?
Good! I’m glad! So now I know I DON’T want poison ivy. XD
A jackalope is like a giant rabbit with antlers. Look up pictures. 😉
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dekreel Okay. Thanks!
@rochellaine @valtmy I must go to sleep now. good night.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Haha. I have phases where I fall in love and out of love with my own projects. I’ve been rereading what I’ve written so far for my WIP to encourage myself to push forward. 😛
Oh by the way, there are some questions I asked you in response to your comments in my doc. Some of them are still bothering me especially the one with regard…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@catwing I like blog posts with art in them (like your comic) and life posts in general. Like the kind of stuff Ethryndal does (if you’ve ever read her blog).
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Yeah…
Oh, right. 😛
Oh, my. Isn’t there a whole month where they fast but feast at night?@dekreel Pretty good. I’m going over some blog things now. What is your favorite type of blog post? Life, writing article, talking about books, book excepts, tags, pictures, polls/quizs? (When I said Saturday I would post I meant August 4,…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Hey hey! That’s fine. 😉 I’m at the part where Chessy is talking to Kai.
I’m very curious about this “boy…” *smirks* How’s your poison ivy doing, by the way? Any better?
Random-ish question: Would you disbelief a jackalope?
@catwing Hullo! Good to see ya! How are you doing?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
OK I’ve put in my suggestions in the doc.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dekreel Hi! I’m on the same time as you! Yay!
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Yes. But you may want to look up the details. 😉
That is strange. I didn’t notice that… I have read some of those passages before but I haven’t thought about it. If I had to guess without doing any research I would say, the Pharisees or Sadducees made up some rule, like you can only walk so many miles on the Sabbath. It could be…[Read more]
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