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@rochellaine

Oh, and regarding the Sapphire and Caderousse interaction thing… It does not make sense for her to be on the lookout for some pretense to arrest Jean. In this Fugitive!Jean situation, she should already think that Jean is guilty of some crime and she would be going straight to arrest him once she’s found him. No pretense necessary.…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I agree a letter would be the most appropriate form of communication in that situation. It’s not about that. It’s that letters appear to be the only form of communication available in this supposedly futuristic society. Even when people are talking about safe, non-revolutionary stuff (which granted, the characters don’t often do but…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Oh, speaking of the odd lifestyle of the Verde family, it randomly occurred to me why you might be struggling with wordbuilding more compared to other dystopian writers.

Most dystopias use an average Joe type of character as a POV to show how life is like for an average person in the dystopian society. But since your POV characters…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Re Sapphire’s mother: If Jean is a fugitive, I do think that the circumstances of her leaving her husband should be different and not so simple. But hey, if all else fails you can always just say that she is dead and thus won’t be complicating the issue to increase your parent body count. 😛

I’m still amused by how dependent this…[Read more]

#1

Yes, I’d thought about some of those consequences but I hadn’t actually thought about Sapphire’s mother. I really should do something with her…she kind of only existed to explain why Sapphire and Chessy had no mother. And I’ve been thinking about the details of the ID system, but that’s a conversation for another time.

#2 That’s true. I…[Read more]

@seekjustice

You’re probably asleep now so I’ll just post my response here for you to see later.

Yes, there’s something really off about the notifications for some reason.

Oh wow the thought that there’s someone out there who is eagerly waiting for the next part of QOD is really terrifying. 😛

Anyway, regarding your idea for Jean’s…[Read more]

@valtmy

For some reason I never got notified that you’d replied 😀

I know, I’m so easily distracted! (and yes, I’m waiting eagerly for the next part!)

most of them, a few pulled out, but I have several thousand (getting close to 15-20k) words  worth of feedback, so I have enough to go on.

I was considering talking to @rochellaine about it…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Oh no! At this rate, I won’t be able to read Wattle Fire for a long while!

But I suppose I have no right to complain, considering my own progress with QOD. 😛

But what problems are you pondering? I am curious to know. You got feedback from all your betas already right?

@valtmy

I’ll be around for a bit 😀 I’m supposed to be drafting, but instead I’m pondering problems in Stars Fill Infinity.

@seekjustice

Hey sorry I disappeared. Was at a home visit. It’s getting late for you but are you still around? 😛

@valtmy @seekjustice Alas I must also vanish into the night and sleep. Farewell. *grins* *vanishes*

@rochellaine Bye!

@rochellaine thanks. :3

@rochellaine *runs back into room excitedly* *grins way too hard* 437! That’s got to be my record or something! Ha! Yes! I won a word war! 😀

@rochellaine Alright, I’m starting. Late, but it’s still a timer, so… *shrug* 🙂

@rochellaine

I might pass on this one. I’m currently just cleaning up a little.

@valtmy

Scrivener doesn’t have Australian spelling (Word does though) so I have to use Canadian spelling, but it doesn’t recognise all those unique Aussie words 😛

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

My characters’ names are all not in English and I have so many characters… So I always turn off grammar and spelling check. 😛

@catwing I added most of my character names to the dictionary on my computer, but new ones still come up with red lines, particularly Yilla for whatever reason.

@rochellaine

Maybe the Word processor is the reason we have intoxicated water and disembowelled voices?

@rochellaine I was talking about how it puts a line under, Kerkin and Cele, my characters names. But I was kinda talking to the squiggly line… So I probably should have just tagged it.
Yes, word war. I’m behind on Nano. Are you on the Nano site? Are you doing Nano? I can’t remember, sorry.

@squiggly-line Stop appearing under my character…[Read more]

@seekjustice In response to your earlier Night Owl question. I think I was on late for a while, then a stopped staying up so late (for a long while I probably met you then), and now I’m back to being on here late.
At least I think that’s how it’s been… I may be remembering wrong.

@rochellaine Yeah. Kerkin is a word squiggly line. Cele is a…[Read more]