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@catwing Continuing our earlier conversation, I didn’t realize that was the kind of prayer shawls you were talking about. 😛  I thought you were talking about men’s prayer shawls, like in Fiddler on the Roof.  So do you mean that the women wore different prayer shawls from their everyday head coverings, (or veils, as I called it in my story,) w…[Read more]

@valtmy Thanks, I’ll take a look. 🙂

Well, I have one more thing.  You asked about what was going on with the guys, and said I didn’t give enough info.  I had written a parallel scene from the guys’ perspective, but just set it aside because I really, really want to have only Bathshua’s POV in this.  However, if you like you could take a look at…[Read more]

@valtmy Hey!  How’s it going?

@catwing I’m sorry for disappearing!  I’m back now, though.  Are you here still?

@dekreel How about you?

@catwing My father was born a Muslim, and became a Christian in college.  I have lived in a mixture of Middle Eastern and Western cultures since I was born, learning to change my behavior depending on which side of the family I was visiting.  So I am drawing off my own experience and my study of the Bible for most of the cultural worldbuilding I a…[Read more]

@seekjustice @dekreel Sorry for disappearing.  As you surmised, I did fall asleep. 😛

@catwing Thank you so much for your comments!!  They are helping me figure out the setting and style better.  I have a LOT of research I need to do before this will be finished.  Thankfully, I do enjoy research. 😀

Are you here now?

@dekreel Oh really?  Well be thankful you never have, and stay away from it! 😛  It’s not a whole lot of fun. 😉

Ohhh!!  The famous Stars Fill Infinity!  The most talked-about book on this forum!  The book I have written fanfiction for… 😛

Glad you’re getting a chance to read it.  What part are you on?

What am I doing?  I am trying to convin…[Read more]

@valtmy Thanks!  I think I will try to make it a little less obvious.  Thank you so much for all the ideas and comments!  They’re very helpful.

Haha. 😛  I love a good brother and sister relationship, so I’m afraid I don’t appreciate the scenes with your MC’s brother at all. 😉

@dekreel 😀

Sorry if I take a while to reply sometimes.  I am currently typing with only one hand because of poison ivy.

Working on anything tonight?

@catwing @valtmy @seekjustice Hey, I’m back!

@dekreel Hi!!!  How are you doing??  You’re actually here!! 😀 😀 😀 (I’m going to keep being overly excited every time you show up until you make it a frequent occurrence. 😉 )

@valtmy Okay, and I could disappear any minute.  But here are a couple of questions:

1. You found out Yishay very quickly.  Would it be more interesting if it were not so obvious, or is it fine as it is?  If I had him just go to his house and wait for Bathshua would that make it harder to figure out?  But that seems quite out of character for an…[Read more]

@seekjustice @valtmy Are either of you around?  I’m here for only a little bit, but I have a couple of questions.

@seekjustice I sent you an invitation to the document. 😀

I won’t be here now for a while, though I might pop in and out.  But I’ll be on later tonight.

Oh, I hope you feel better soon!! 🙁  Rest is good, though. 😉

@jenwriter17 I have a few remedies I am using.  Hopefully it’ll go away soon. 😉

Sorry you had to go, but I guess I wasn’t really here anyway. 😛  I’ll probably be on later tonight.

@jenwriter17 I’m doing housework right now, and that’s why my replies are sometimes far between. 😉

Sorry to hear about the cough, but glad it’s only temporary. 😀

My poison ivy is not getting any better, and I still can barely use my left hand. 🙁 (especially bad since I’m left-handed. 😛 ) But I learned something cool because of it.  I took a…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Oh, too bad.  Bye!

@seekjustice @valtmy @catwing @dekreel Is anyone else around?

@jenwriter17 I’m still here, in and out. 😉

That’s strange.  Would you like me to try re-inviting you and see if that works?

I’d much rather have comments on the document so I don’t lose them in the mires of the forums, 😛 but if it ends up you can’t comment at all I’d love to hear your thoughts anyway, so in that case commenting here would be fine.

@jenwriter17 I think I sent it to you.  Hope you get it all right. 😉

I’m here, sort of.  I’ll be off and on for a bit.  How’s it going?

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @valtmy @catwing Hey people!  The first section of Daughter of Judas is ready for comments!!  If anyone wants to read it, let me know and I’ll send you an invite to the document. 😀

Warning: I do not write anywhere near as fast as SeekJustice or a lot of the people on here, so the progress is slow.  The part you’ll be re…[Read more]

@valtmy Thanks! I’ll have a look in a bit.

Hm, I thought I gave you some comments here on the forums.  Did I not?  I guess you still want more detailed comments in the document?  Okay, I’ll be on a long car ride today, so I should be able to reread it and actually comment this time.

Thanks for reminding me.  I often forget about something unl…[Read more]