Grace W.

Oh hi there! Welcome to Kingdom Pen, a place of Wonder, Excitement, and Discov…. Wait a minute…

Anyway, welcome to the aptly named “bestiest” place on the internet. I hope you enjoy your time on here 🙂

@Anne-of-Lothorien Aha, second-person. That is when it’s “You do this” as opposed to “I did this” or “He did this”, right? I have written a Choose Your Own Adventure story for my friend once, and I used second-person, then I took it and turned it into first-person and started making it into a proper story, rather than a CYOA. But most CYOAs use…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothorien Aha, second-person. That is when it’s “You do this” as opposed to “I did this” or “He did this”, right? I have written a Choose Your Own Adventure story for my friend once, and I used second-person, then I took it and turned it into first-person and started making it into a proper story, rather than a CYOA. But most CYOAs use…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy: What do you mean by deep third-person? How is that different to regular third-person?

@ethryndal

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You know Rock Raiders???!??!? 😀 Yes it is! I textured a minifig rig I made as him! 😀

Also, what’s wrong with Iron Man? Or do you just not like the movies?

@ethryndal

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You know Rock Raiders???!??!? 😀 Yes it is! I textured a minifig rig I made as him! 😀

Hello! Welcome to KP, what is known as the “bestistest” place on the interwebz! 😀 I, too, am fairly new, but I feel right at home in this “community” of writers, and I hope you will too!

I prefer third-person, reading and writing, though I’m not strictly a third-person-reader or writer. But it depends on who or what the story is focussing on whether you writer in first- or third-person, and what kind of a mood you want to set, because the different POVs do set different moods. With first-person, it gives you the chance to explore…[Read more]

@hope If that is true, then how on earth do I know of that quote??? :O 😀

The Avengers is not as great as Inception but it is a must watch if you want to learn how to handle ensembles in your book.

I have to ask… What exactly is an ensemble?

Also… About my favorite movie… I have so many that I like, such as Toy Story 2, WALL-E, Despicable Me 1 and 2, The LEGO Movie, Tomorrowland, War Room, God’s Not Dead, and…[Read more]

@mark-kamibaya That quote sounds familiar, though I don’t know for sure where I’ve heard it. Is it from God’s Not Dead?

@emma-flournoy

I just found the huge paragraph describing a Super NES in my Portal Fan fiction… Oh my word! XD

@Daeus

Okay, fair enough. Would it be okay to link it via Dropbox or to another website where it’s published?

@ethryndal

XD Good one! 😛

@emma-flournoy

Oh…um… Since…Probably 2011, but it was sporadic, short, and limited to a certain forum. I wrote and finished my first serious story (fan fiction) in 2012, and I’ve continued with a passion since then. Aside from abandoned attempt at writing my own fiction in mid 2012, I stuck to fan fiction for most of my writing life, trying…[Read more]

@daeus: Cursing may seem to add a natural feeling to a character, but, in my opinion, it shouldn’t. “Bad words” are called bad words for a reason: they are often offensive. Just consider how some people feel about this. If you publish your book, you might sell more copies if people felt better about recommending it. I personally wouldn’t recommend…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper: I don’t think that quote is from Rogue One (which I am insanely excited about). It sounds like something that would fit, though.

@winter-rose: Love the new profile picture!
And yes, it was from Zootopia 🙂

Love it @bluejay, absolutely love it