Grace W.

@ethryndal

What if his “full, official” title is the Silver Spark/Flame of Dimwood, and everyone just shortens it to the Silver Spark/Flame? By the way, I see your point about going for spark rather than flame, but as @dragon-snapper said, it’s quick and passing. But I love how he rebels and wears silver. 🙂

Other words for “spark” and “flame”…[Read more]

@ethryndal This sounds as if it’s really coming together 🙂 I hope you’ll be letting us read it? 😀 😉

@ethryndal What about The Marsh Fox? That…..doesn’t look as good as it sounded in my head, actually. Oh well.

@ethryndal Oh, I’m glad you will be able to exchange the tickets! That’s great.

I’m going to be writing for close to an hour if anyone wants to join in. 🙂 (Sorry I’ve been absent, by the way.)

@ethryndal I never once thought of rodent when reading Rodyn. 🙂 Also, glad you liked the pun 😉

I think multiple POV’s in First can be fun, @gideon-sowdon . If you use them, just make sure that it’s the best way to tell your story, that all of these rather intimate perspectives are both interesting and necessary to advance the story.

For instance, if all of the POV’s are in the same place at the same time most of the time, then there…[Read more]

I think multiple POV’s in First can be fun, @gideon-sowdon . If you use them, just make sure that it’s the best way to tell your story, that all of these rather intimate perspectives are both interesting and necessary to advance the story.

For instance, if all of the POV’s are in the same place at the same time most of the time, then there…[Read more]

@sarah-h

Oh, I see. That makes sense. Well, you will certainly warm up to Pandora and James. They’re probably going to be the most consistent characters in the whole series.

@daeus Oh, okay.

@leumeister I hope you don’t mind me jumping in here, but I’ve always preferred for a few MCs to stay consistent through a series. It takes me a while to warm up to new characters. 🙂

Oh. It’s so sad that two little girls, the same age, died at the same time of the same thing.

@dragon-snapper

Regardless of the reason, it’s nice that someone is confident in my ability. 🙂

@northerner Lol, I agree, he is a great character – I don’t see anything wrong with making the title of a Robin-Hood-character be a fox (unless the creator of said character didn’t want to of course 😉 ) It’s like a nod to the ones already existing and kinda continuing the tradition *shrugs*

@northerner The Disney Robin Hood was a fox, and also Nick from Zootopia, and he was very “charming,” witty, bold and reckless 😉

What about something like “The Angels’ Thief” or “Thief of Angels”? lol, or “Thy Rodyn, Thy Staff, they comfort me” – absolutely not! (me with the punz…. 😛 But I couldn’t resist)

Is he elusive? Like, he helps people, but doesn’t really show himself, so no one knows what he looks like? He could be like “The Invisible Angel” or “The Invisible…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper

XD I thank you for your confidence. 😛

Btw, why are you confident in that? You’ve probably never read any of my works save for the excerpt on the front page of this topic. Just curious. 🙂