Grace W.

I’m at my grandparents’ house, surrounded by cats … someone please write with me! What about you, @jess ? Will you save me??

I’m at my grandparents’ house, surrounded by cats … someone please write with me! What about you, @jess ?

@bluejay This is really great. I’m not sure what kind of poetry it is, but I like it a lot. The only thing that seemed out-of-place was the word “Polite” ending the gentleness verse. I’m not sure why. Maybe because the other lines are focusing on the sweet, thoughtful, er…gentle nature of gentleness. Is that helpful?
Visual poetry is a lot of…[Read more]

It’s hard to explain for me too, @clairec I wrote a little, but I mostly studied the narrative style I was using and corrected portions to make it more consistent and try to get a feel for how everything was supposed to read.

I’m using Third Person, but I’m not entirely sure what type it is. It’s either Limited or Deep.

Anyway, thanks for…[Read more]

That’s great, @clairec ! 🙂 I got a little held up but I’ll start in 2 minutes.

I plan to start writing in 10 minutes if anyone wants to join. 🙂
@winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy @jess @dragon-snapper @clairec

@bluejay That’s too bad. Living in the country is such fun (for me anyway), but the downside of it -no people- is pretty terrible. This is the first year I’ve been part of a good youth group, but it’s changed my life and I’d miss it a lot if we had to leave. KP is so awesome. I’m glad you are able to get some Christian fellowship, even though it’s…[Read more]

@bluejay I was in church, first at a conference and then at youth, pretty much all day today, and although I didn’t have much time for Bible reading, I got touched by the Holy Spirit in a pretty amazing way. So I had a completely awesome day in that respect. Hopefully I’ll be able to read a lot tomorrow. I’m kinda fired up right now. Guess what…[Read more]

Thanks for tagging me, @winter-rose and @dragon-snapper , but I’m taking a day off from working on my project. Tomorrow afternoon/evening sometime would be great though. 🙂

@hope If I were you, I would keep the prophecy stanza and delete the bolded part entirely. Although it’s poetic, it doesn’t really add anything and it’s very vague.

Thanks, @winter-rose . You’re a good friend. 🙂

That’s great, @daeus. 🙂 I did alright. I wrote 334 words. Thanks for writing with me!

Mallory thinks that sounds good and she’d love for you to join her, @daeus . 😉 🙂

Anyone up for some writing?
How about you, @kate-flournoy @daeus @dragon-snapper @winter-rose and/or whoever else might like to join me? 🙂

I agree with deleting the bolded sentences. And it seems too long to go on the back of a book, but I really like it. It’s a good summary. The one phrase that really doesn’t flow is “An oath to the king and an assassination attempt later, the messenger…” I’m too tired to think of anything else, though. 🙂

I agree with deleting the bolder sentences. And it seems too long to go on the back of a book, but I really like it. It’s a good summary. The one phrase that really doesn’t flow is “An oath to the king and an assassination attempt later, the messenger…” I’m too tired to think of anything else, though. 🙂

@ClaireC @Anna-Brie Yay, we can all do it together! 🙂 And @ClaireC please don’t worry about it. I don’t mind waiting. 🙂

@theliterarycrusader Thank you so much for joining KP! It will be neat to have a “real” writer to ask questions to. (Not that everyone else isn’t a real writer, but you know what I mean. 🙂 )

@Anne-Swiftblade Welcome! Your username is cool; you sound like a character in a medieval adventure novel. Wow, you’ve written quite a lot. Good for you! 🙂

I laughed when I read your questions, @winter-rose . 🙂

How far into my book am I? I’d say my story is a lot like Battleship when you’ve got pins sporadically placed all over your gameboard but none of the ships are sunk yet so you know the battle’s only just beginning …

So…it’s kinda hard to track my progress at this point, but I have…[Read more]