@raxforge
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The thing looks like it wants to spray acidic vomit at me. Either that or bite me and make me turn radioactive. So it dyin’, no matter what.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)YAY!! Rax and Ben get to do something finally! Barnes is interesting though…
@whalekeeper @loopylin @koshkaRax and Ben
The teacher gave both Rax and Ben a startle, and Rax at first was a bit rebellious. Being under a tyrant all his life he wanted to not be under anyone right now. Ben knew exactly what Rax was thinking, “If you don’t lower yourself under her, you won’t learn anything.” Rax thought for about this for a moment, then nodded in understanding. They both joined in the line, Ben behind Rax, though Ben was a little to the side of Rax, as was his custom whenever following Rax.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Mateo saw that his friend had sat down, and he sat in a place where many people were unfamiliar to him. So, Mateo did what he seemed to be the normal thing to do and that is to stand behind him, like a dog loyal to his master.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)@loopylin @theducktator @keilah-h
He looks like an alien and if he was coming at me, no matter the size, I would kill it.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)@keilah-h Hurrah! I might add one sometime in the future, but not right now
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#AnduthForever (❤️)How many charries am I allowed to have at a time on the RP?
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Fine! Mateo thought to himself, It should be more, ‘Yes, sorry, Senior Mateo’ not ‘Fine’! I should blow him to pieces. *sigh* But that will upset Little Fellow, and I do not want that. He is fearless of the dead, which may be his downfall at some point but for now it has my respect. And at least the mocoso is respectful to Little Fellow.
A little piece inside Mateo’s dead mind :]
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#AnduthForever (❤️)My first written story was about a squirrel who drank coffee and eventually saved his father from an owl by using coffee. I am very imaginative, and I come up with stories often, but almost none of them are written.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Mateo broke his gaze with Celarent to look at his little friend. He contemplated for a moment, then spoke, “Fine, but you,” he pointed at Celarent, “Better choose your words more carefully.”
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#AnduthForever (❤️)I’m sorry guys, Mateo might kill someone soon… or blow something up
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Mateo suddenly stopped playing. “How about I end yours?” His voice became lower, his eyes pierced Celarent’s, striking fear into him in Mateo’s unnatural way.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)A secret squirrel kingdom deep in the heart of the oldest woods? A band of exiles with unknown crimes in their pasts? I am intrigued.
YAY! I had a good idea!
It’s redundant to say the squirrels are good at hiding twice. It made this bit feel like it was going in circles, which is sad because it’s an important part of that intro.
Yeah, I’ll see if there’s a way to not repeat but still have the same impact.
Love the oxymoron between the squirrel’s loyalty to secrets and apparent lack of loyalty to their country.
Thanks!
Overall, very good! I’m interested to see where it goes.
Me too. Thanks for the feedback!
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#AnduthForever (❤️)The answer is “no.”
Gasp! How did you know?! lol
@whalekeeper @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyonMateo
Mateo looked at his friend with a quizzical look and shook his head. “Never heard of it. Is it a place where you fight? Blow stuff up? … Play music.” Mateo then started to play a happy Mexican melody.
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