@raxforge
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I’m sorry guys, Mateo might kill someone soon… or blow something up
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Mateo suddenly stopped playing. “How about I end yours?” His voice became lower, his eyes pierced Celarent’s, striking fear into him in Mateo’s unnatural way.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)A secret squirrel kingdom deep in the heart of the oldest woods? A band of exiles with unknown crimes in their pasts? I am intrigued.
YAY! I had a good idea!
It’s redundant to say the squirrels are good at hiding twice. It made this bit feel like it was going in circles, which is sad because it’s an important part of that intro.
Yeah, I’ll see if there’s a way to not repeat but still have the same impact.
Love the oxymoron between the squirrel’s loyalty to secrets and apparent lack of loyalty to their country.
Thanks!
Overall, very good! I’m interested to see where it goes.
Me too. Thanks for the feedback!
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#AnduthForever (❤️)The answer is “no.”
Gasp! How did you know?! lol
@whalekeeper @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyonMateo
Mateo looked at his friend with a quizzical look and shook his head. “Never heard of it. Is it a place where you fight? Blow stuff up? … Play music.” Mateo then started to play a happy Mexican melody.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)The answer is yes if you can’t hear the sarcasm
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#AnduthForever (❤️)@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin
Mateo is probably one of my favorite charries only for the fact that he’s a anti-hero/villain who plays guitar and blows stuff up XD
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#AnduthForever (❤️)@whalekeeper @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon
Mateo
Mateo looked confused, he was not supposed to kill him? Mateo glared at his captive as he slowly put him down. He turned back to the little fellow, “What are we doing here, Pequeño? Are we here to fight? Blow stuff up? Play music?” As he asked the last question, he spun his guitar around and held it in his hands, ready to play.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Mateo nodded, “I’ll be back.” Mateo left and found the guy who insulted Pequeño, and dragged him back to the class. “Pequeño, how should I kill this guy?”
Which class are we in again.
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Sorry the format is weird
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#AnduthForever (❤️)That’s really cool! If I ever have something I want to publish, I’ll 100% look into it
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Mateo
Mateo looked at the kid, he said in a threatening voice, “Don’t make that mistake again.” He then turned to little fellow and said in his ‘light-hearted’ voice, “Where too, Pequeño?”
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#AnduthForever (❤️)Yeah, I might send Rax in there to deal with Mateo if Mateo start throwing bombs 😁
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