Andrew

@keilah-h

Rory

Hunter was friendly, even if he was part dragon. He also seemed just a little bit shy. Rory didn’t mind the feel of the claw against his hand so much.

Hunter was thinking about the next part of the question, his tail lashing thoughtfully. “I, uh…We were enrolled in this school at our old guardian’s request. She was nice……[Read more]

@ellette-giselle that’s great! Glad you’re having fun!

Hunter

“No worries, I just have never seen a guy with wings or… or claws…” The boy looked embarrassed. “I’m Rory Alans. It’s nice to meet you, Hunter. I… I’m not from around here…” He stopped and considered his next words carefully. “Where do you come from, and how did you end up here?” H…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Btw, I haven’t had so much fun in a LONG time! 😀

@keilah-h

Rory

The winged boy had lowered his hand. He had given a name. Hunter. Rory forced himself not to flinch at every movement Hunter made. He’s not an enemy. He’s not going to try and kill you. Still keeping an eye on the claws, Rory took a step forward. “No worries, I just have never seen a guy with wings or… or claws…” he…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ooh nice art!

and haha @linus-smallprint Alan and Keefe don’t look much alike, do they? lol

(gets flashbacks of imagining Oliver with a slouch hat despite the fact that you said there was to be NO HATS IN THE LYEN ARMY)

hehe glad you didn’t go full out on me

@ellette-giselle that was perfect!!

Hunter

An older human boy. A little timid of the claws.

“Sorry.” Hunter brought his hand down, sensing the other boy’s apprehension. “I promise I’m not out to hurt you. What’s your name? I’m Hunter.”

He kept his wings folded and his claws at his sides, so as to look as unthreatening as he could.

@keilah-h

Did I do it right, or did I not introduce him the way I was supposed to?

@linus-smallprint

Most of that was just for fun to get you back for your reaction to the way I imagined Turin

*gasp* How could you!? At least I didn’t imagine Alan with a BEARD and I got his AGE right! That’s what really matters. *sniffs in sophisticated British manner*

I guessed you were joking. lol.

@ellette-giselle

That was so scathing yet grateful that I don’t know whether to laugh or cry. lolololol.

Most of that was just for fun to get you back for your reaction to the way I imagined Turin. If I had told you in person, I would have probably been grinning mischievously the whole time, so don’t worry about it.

I was board. That’s what you…

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@theshadow

Just read your chapter. I have a couple of things for you.

Firstly, some things about your introduction. I think your intro paragraph to the chapter may be unnecessary. Why? Because soon after, you show us many of these problems in the hushed whispers of the peasants.

Blossom Town’s suffering had only grown worse. The farmers b…

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K, I have another drawing and It’s fan-art for none of you. So there.

Lol.

@linus-smallprint

That was so scathing yet grateful that I don’t know whether to laugh or cry. lolololol.

Good grief. You are hard to please.

I was board. That’s what you get.

Maybe if I was actually trying I would do it better.

mid-late 19th-century styles

Good grief! That’s a left fielder.

@ellette-giselle

As my imagination for Turin was off, your illustration of Alan is off. The clothing is wrong. I base my clothing on the mid-late 19th-century styles and add some fantasy elements. This Alan looks like he came out of Lord of the Rings! Alan wears a scarf, not a cape! Also, the hair! This does not look black and feathery! It does…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yes…….

@mineralizedwritings

Just a heads up, the drawing I submit may not be as finished as some of the others I have done. I procrastinated and then got busy with school and work. I will post what I do manage to get done on here tomorrow.

@ellette-giselle

Remember that time I imagined Turin with a beard?

@grcr oooh I like yours too!

@mineralizedwritings here is mine! Don’t know how close it is to the real thing, but I like it either way.

@grcr

I can’t wait to see yours!

*Cringe* Don’t get your hopes up……….