Andrew

@linus-smallprint

btw, it won’t let me share it. It’s a PDF and I can’t get it on here.

@linus-smallprint

Wow. You make Sanderson’s books look short.

*Bows* thank you!

So why include this Epilogue in book one then?

Um, because I like it. Is it bad? I can cut it. I just felt like it was a nicer ending the Sabina crying, plus I have a seven year jump ending in the next one, and a several year jump in the last one.

(I have a f…

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@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle wowww those are so cool!!

@ellette-giselle

But, Sabina is in no place to be reading at the moment. So, this letter actually wouldn’t show up until the second book when Sabina gets a POV in the very beginning. Do you think it would be better to shift it to book two. It would be Aaron’s last letter, and it would be unread. So, the reader would know he wrote it, but never kno…

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@linus-smallprint

Not your fault at all. I just lost my own personal race.

Yes, I can send the whole thing in just one sec. I’m going to lock it down tho, just because KP is somewhere anyone can get onto, so you won’t be able to do anything but read. Not even copy and paste. Hope you don’t mind.

So Aaron held on to the end, and he…

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@ellette-giselle

No, wait, your not supposed to be one yet! Grrrr. (Explanation: I told myself I would get the next scenes fully edited and cleaned up before you or Keilah got on and commented on my WIP. I failed. lol)

Because you asked me whether or not Aaron I thought Aaron would die and I assumed it would be answered in the next section, I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

My brother would most certainly not be smiling. He’d be saying, “What the heck are you doing?”

Lol XDXD I get that. The brother would think she’s crazy at first and he’d be scared for her, but it’s still a gesture of love.

If she was going to go with him, at all, she should go as a nurse or something and work behind battle lines…

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@whalekeeper

Uh… no.

My brother would most certainly not be smiling. He’d be saying, “What the heck are you doing?”

If she was going to go with him, at all, she should go as a nurse or something and work behind battle lines.

Out of curiosity, do you have a brother?

@ellette-giselle

Of course, in the best scenario. Do you see how going with him represents victory over her fear? Can you imagine the smile on her brother’s face when she insists on doing everything he has to do, right alongside him? Even if it isn’t the best thing that could have happened?

@whalekeeper

I understand your point about extremes, but I still believe there are better ways for Bonnie to show love and support.

@mineralizedwritings
Oh yes, it’s totally nostalgia XD But you might like it because it has the mystery of happening underground in mines. The deeper you go, the stranger things get, and the melancholy of a lost world keeps popping up in the music or background art. It is very immersive.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, staying home and giving support would be best in a perfect world. I totally get that. But it’s all about Bonnie’s mindset, WHY is she doing this?

Bonnie hides behind all the traditional supportive things because those are the safe things, everyone expects you to do them and her brother has a hard time believing it’s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness crazy.

She’s gonna need a translator if you keep that up.

Plus, it’s just a weird mix of old and modern English. (lol)

Let the expert take a hand.

The time hath come for thou to submit thy character description. Writeth one whenst thou art ready and tageth the artists

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness crazy.

She’s gonna need a translater if you keep that up.

Plus, it’s just a wierd mix of old and modern english. (lol)

Let the expert take a hand.

The time hath come for thou to submit thy character description. Writeth one whenst thou art ready and tageth the artists

@whalekeeper

No, Bonnie is being a little stupid at that point. She should completely and whole heartedly encourage and support her brother, (as long as he’s doing what’s right.) But that doesn’t mean she should take his weapon and go charging into war for him, or even take a weapon and go charging into war with him. She has many other things she…[Read more]

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

I’m sorry it’s so long. I hope no one is reading this on their phone, because then it would seem REALLY long. There just wasn’t a good place to split this up.

So, picking up where we left off at the end of Aaron’s letter.

My Dear Joseph,

I don’t know how to begin this; It is so hard to say farewell. Dear little o…

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@whalekeeper

haha. Thanks.

@ellette-giselle

They are better than what I can do, at present. :]

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! The hands are a learning curve, but much easier than realistic hands.

Yuussss I play Hollow Knight, it was my first video game. <3 I could say a lot about how awesome it is. The combat and storytelling are the best part.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! I can’t stand the other hand tho.