Andrew

@ellette-giselle no no that’s actually really helpful! Thanks!

1–Often when I draw the character’s vest it goes kinda straight and interferes with the shape of the body some. I need to work on that. There is one scene where I have her without it though, and I’ll be drawing that one soon, so I’ll keep that advice in mind for that.

3–yeah I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

OHHHH…..

I had no idea he was no longer human.

No, no, I totally agree with the sin thing. There is no “little sin”.

I like the idea of him having life lasting consequences. It’s going to really hurt for him to have to tell her they can’t have kids because of what he did, and to know his choices are causing her grief.

I…

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@ellette-giselle oh man that last one is hilarious

plus all the writing and book memes. I heavily sympathize.

@stephie

I completely agree, although I’d like to ask how old they both are. Because Alan seems to have a lot of backstory for somebody who could be about Martha’s age.

Martha is the older of the two, by about a year. She is supposed to be eighteen while Alan is still seventeen. I know, I know, if she was two years younger, then they could sin…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wait, why?!! Why can’t they have kids?!

I mean, Alan just has a few feathers in his hair, (and on his arm). What does that have to do with having kids?

In the world of Ehverwyld, magic is an allegory for sin. Sometimes we suffer the consequences of sin for our whole life. Also, as I was teaching the kids in my Sunday School c…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I would join, but my character is very humanoid. Basically just a human with fur and horns.

@keilah-h

Before anyone kills me, these are generalizations and hacks to make a character look more like a girl. NOW, I KNOW NOT ALL GIRLS WILL BE THE SAME. And some may have more masculine features, However, these are some hacks that helped me.

Based off of the drawing you did, I can see some ways that you could improve and help it look more…[Read more]