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@whalekeeper

It feels trustworthy. Reminds me of Bark of the Bog Owl by Jonathan Rogers and The Oddmire by William Ritter.

I haven’t read either, but now you’ve got me curious

@ellette-giselle

All right, Ellette, here you go. Getting close to 3,000 words of feedback for you here. Please let me know if anything doesn’t make sense or if the link is not working for you. I haven’t proofread this too carefully, so there may be some questionable grammar mistakes.

Let there be Light Feedback

@the_lost-journal I heard that word and could only think of a quote from a character I used for a fanfic. This is him introducing himself in his canon work:

Hey look, buddy, I’m an Engineer. That means I solve problems. Not problems like “What is beauty?”, because that would fall within the purview of your conundrums of philosophy. I solve…

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@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint

(if you were reading something like Fifty Shades of Grey or Twilight we would be having a totally different conversation)

OOOF NOOOOO NOT TWILIGHT

There was one good thing about it, and that was the fact that even my trashiest works look like masterpieces next to it. And they’re at least pretty much…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

“What are you doing here?”

“Catching bullets, apparently.”

This is why Jayson is so awesome. (Did you just shoot my boy?)

@whalekeeper

*Snorting laugh*

@the_lost-journal

“Filthy German!”

My character Dr. Humboldt would take offense to that. If he were here, of course, which he’s not because I don’t let him anywhere near the computer.

lol but if anyone can be described as “filthy German” it’s him. He’s nice enough sometimes, but he’s also a mad scientist and has done some nasty things to…[Read more]

@power

I want one!!!

@power

Oh. Oh my. That’s kind of concerning in a “I definitely don’t need one of those” way.

@rae @raxforge

She’s right. It’s a great book, and the series just keeps getting better!

@koshka

I know!

@linus-smallprint

The farmer Charles Wherl, before he used magic, is somewhat inspired by Charles Ingles. THey are both fathers who live in a house in the woods with their families, enjoy telling stories to their children, and play some sort of instrument (Though the fact that they are both named Charles is pure coincidence). The reason why I was…

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@ellette-giselle

Eeeeeeepers. Yeah no. I’m with Helmer on hights; they’re tolerable, but I’ll die with my feet on the ground, thank you very much.

XD

@raxforge

Wow, I got tagged twice in one post, I must be special!

Yes, you are very special.

I will NOT let you get out of reading Freedom’s Fire! If I had to choose between you reading hers and mine, I’d tell you to read hers. I AM THAT SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!

@koshka

You know what makes that scene even scarier? He actually climbed the real building.

There were safety nets below him, but still!!!!

Yeah, I think you can claim the paralysis gloves. Then again, who knows. Someone else probably came up with them. Or, years and years later, a kid will be writing a book and go, “I have this amazing…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Wait! Really!

Oh wow! That’s amazing!!

@ellette-giselle

True, true. I think I can claim my paralysis gloves though (although that was inspired by some medical stuff).

(No? But I was cringing inside and wide-eyed)

@ellette-giselle

Nope. I’ve already typed up 1,367 words for you. I’ve been slowly chipping away at this when I’ve had the chance.

@linus-smallprint

Oh yippy!!!!

I was sitting here thinking “He forgot all about it. He’s gonna ask for the end of November.” Lol.

I’m really looking forward to your answers!

@ellette-giselle

I’m getting there. I finished rereading your story and will hopefully have my answers for you very soon. In fact, I don’t have any pressing School assignments at the moment and have written a lot for my own story this week, so I will be working on that right away.

@linus-smallprint

Well, it’s the end of October and I have been waiting with bated breath! (very patiently, I might add)

Do you have any answers to the questions, or do you want to wait until the VERY end of October?