Andrew

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Okay.

That was somethin’ else.

I’m not sure what to think of this. On the one hand, I kinda appreciate his zeal. On the other hand, I feel like going full on Pyro and making a show of burning Disney characters might be funny in a dark kinda way, but it’s also likely to alienate non-Christians cause then they’re…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.

The one you shared is fine. I could see this ending up on one of my playlists. It does have emotion. I just feel like it was a bit on the dramatic side and some of the notes were a little too sharp for this scene. I asked my sister for her thoughts since she doesn’t have a load of Chrono Trigger…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Hello! Hello!

Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)

Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.

Yes, I am going for a darker stage.

Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…

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@keilah-h

One question though, how far is this in the book? Are we nearing the end, or does Alan still have some character development to do (maybe sharing this great news with his friends….?)

We are looking at about 7-10 more chapters plus an epilogue. There is one more piece of Alan’s character I still want to develop in this book. This may b…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin

Ellis — (Edge of the Deepwild)

Ellis was forced activate his sword in order to get through a particularly thick clump of brambles. Soulmight sliced through the bushes with satisfying efficiency, leaving the ends of the branches sizzling quietly. After a minute or so, he suddenly stumbled out of the trees.

He…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hello!

Book 2 time, I see. Well let’s get started on it.

Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us. Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be strong for him while dealing with her struggles.

So for this book, are you going…[Read more]

@jonas

Yep, that works. It’s just Marcel, Sara and Fel, moseying along.

@whalekeeper

How many people are in that group? Three?

Maybe I’ll have Ellis meet that group, and Ilahna can find her way into the city and meet @highscribeofaetherium‘s character?

@rae

I’m reading about charries and Vikings!

@ellette-giselle

Lol I was up late, so I got up at eight. And I still have road lag from my trip to D.C. Oh, well.

@jonas

Yours can meet up with ours, but I feel like the larger the group gets, the harder it will be to pace the conversation.

@the_lost-journal

Rina —– (Everstrand, outskirts)

Rina instinctively made a portal as something came flying towards her face. An arrow shot out of a second portal behind her and embedded itself in the ground, quivering ominously. There was someone who appeared to be a city guard shooting arrows at two people who were somehow on the side of a…[Read more]

Phew! Done. So, it looks like the only characters that have not met up with anyone yet are Ellis, Ilahna, Klethen, Marcellus, and Everett (who hasn’t been added at all yet.) My two are in the forest, and seem to be the only ones, so they may just meet up with each other.

Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.

Frustrating charrie.

YES! 100%

Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.

@rae

@whalekeeper

I finished school this morning. I get up at five to do it and I work fast, Reading and writing are a strong point of mine, and I have a lot of that. I normally finish around ten.

@whalekeeper

Same!

Reading about charries and DNA!

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s what I want to know 😥 I have a school book open right now and I’m going back and forth to keep up.

@raxforge

I think Baron needs French Toast…it would certainly improve his mood XD

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.

Frustrating charrie.

10 pages!!!!!!

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian at the Everstrand edge

Brutus’s eyes met Leon’s as if he were going to make some kind of firy remark, but he turned his gaze away. “Hesitation can mean death. Learn that and quick.” He pulled a dagger off of one of the guards, turning it so that it reflected his…[Read more]