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Active 7 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@theshadow yeah, they do lol
I think I figured it out some though.
Sniper, like the rest of his team, fears nearly nothing, except magic of any kind. (Listening to some of his voicelines on Halloween-exclusive game modes, he seems utterly terrified at the concept of being attacked by a wizard or ghost.)
Obviously Silvanis and Fairy’s powers…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I feel kinda bad for traumatizing this child.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Alright, I will.
Shorter section, but I want to make sure Joseph is making sense and his character is developing well before I post more.
A week passed.
For Joseph, it was a time of raw pain. He had always been shy and quiet, but now he seemed even more so. He seemed older than his years, and…
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
What’s that signature? XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh that sounds amazing!!! Oh I would love, love, love that! If I do go down there someday, would you be willing to meet me?
How old is the age cut-off?
Do you know the dates?
Does it cost?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Very well, continue.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh I know that. I just think it’s so cool that you’ve seen them in person!
You should go to called conference. You’d love it
To what conference?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I mean you want to meet all of those people
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
What do you mean by that?
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
You have goals, girl XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
So do you still live around there?
Were you ever at one of his Sabbath dinners?
have you met THEE Nate Wilson?
Or Brian Cole?
Or Rachel and Becka?
Oh, or Christine Cohen!!!???
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I mean, didn’t you used to think, when you were a little kid, that your dad was equal to super man, and your mom was flawless? (I sure did)
Now that we’re older, we can understand that they are just human, but when we are young, mom and dad can do anything and they’ve never once done something wrong in their lives.
The adults…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
It benefits you, the reader.
We know Aaron was not the perfect man Joseph thought he was.
We now know Sabina is not the strong, fearless young woman that Joseph thinks she is.
We can see the flaws in Joseph’s thinking, and understand them, but they are flaws.
Plus, I can’t go kill the poor thing’s Fiance without giving…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle ok! I didn’t say remove the scene, it’s good.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Really? That’s crazy. If you think he’s chill, than he must be, because you are the epitome of chill. I was worried there for a second that he was serious. I’m so used to seeing radical people on the internet. I’m glad that isn’t the case here. Thanks so much for clearing that up!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
He’s kinda one of my heroes. I love his stuff, and his attitude, and….. well…… I buy almost all my books from Canon and have the canon app, and have always wanted to go to Moscow Idaho to visit him. (And also talk to Nate, but I’d have to be ready to have my books destroyed. lol)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
No. I only do that once…..? But I really, really needed that scene to set Sabina’s stage, and there really wasn’t another way to get that scene, because she wouldn’t have broken down like that in front of Joseph. I want to drive the point that he is not he only one hurting. She just watched her fiance die on their wedding day. Sh…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
no offense to HP fans or any series really
None taken, you’re much less condemning than some people have been and I appreciate that.
You can like whatever the Saxton Haleyou like, as long as it’s not controlling you and it’s not encouraging you to try any stuff (magic, murder, substance abuse, you name it) in the real world. Just don’t…
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