Andrew

Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@koshka ooooh very cool!!

@smiley good idea

I rarely go onto those sites too and if I do it’ll be specifically for a fic that has no shipping or that I’ve researched and know it’s clean shipping

and ugh I knowwwww nobody ever finishes their fanfics

like I read this one a little while ago that had a good plot and the characters were pretty accurate to the original…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!

kinda like how the Half-life games and Portal games are technically in the same universe but what you do in one has literally no bearing on the other.

(sorry for that seemingly random analogy, I was busy writing a fanfic using that story universe earlier, possibly a sequel to my TF2 one)

@rae oh okay, cool!!

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure! I still have off of school for another week, so I’ll have plenty of time.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure, I can. I’m taking a break from my own WIP, so I definitely have some time to read through it. The link is the one on your profile page?

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I forgot about your question regarding a book that turns into a fantasy book part way through.

I haven’t read A Series of Unfortunate Events, but I have read some other books where reality becomes fantasy. Here are some ideas for you for your foreshadowing:

• Fantasy Ideas: Maybe you could have some things like one character…

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@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.

@the_lost-journal

So what chapter are you on right now? 

TNPT: The Cost is now finished. 34 chapters + a prologue and discussion questions. I’m just getting feedback for now before I start working on Book II.

Also how are you so brave?! I would be so scared that people would judge my writing. That’s why I stoped with the short story I was sh…

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@theshadow

Sorry, just saw this now. I haven’t been able to read it for a bit with school picking up now. Sorry, hopefully at some point I’ll catch up.

That’s okay. If your too busy don’t feel like you have to read this. Thank you for letting me know where you are.

@loopylin

Reading it right now! Sorry, I’ve gotten behind. I’ll let you know my thoughts once I’m done :]

Awesome! Thank you!

Don’t know if I’ve said this before, but the way Lyens name everything is hilarious XD

Sometimes, limits bring out creativity. I was struggling to come up with names for them, other than the names I am currently using, so…[Read more]