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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yay!!!!
aw, thanks for making me laugh. Smaug the laptop ate two years of historical research and I’m so not happy.
I’ll look at this right away!
btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
https://1drv.ms/w/c/bcdce8f567320b25/ETDxCG51PcpJg0VV9oF5LxAB-hfZiwM2BGSvsV_bbcIq3w?e=sauIgi
That’s a messy looking link, that is. You should click on it. It might contains some Book feedback!!
Hopefully, Microsoft Word is still acceptable.
I didn’t get around to rereading the book this time. But this is what my thoughts…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
“We’re going to fix this tile.”
He opened the bottle of sealant and carefully poured it into the cracks between shards. It pooled over the tile in a nice, whitish gloup. Using a paint scraper from his belt, Leo spread the stuff out until both broken tiles were covered in an even layer.
“This stuff will set up hard as steel…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
leaving the kid anywhere didn’t seem…wise. He had a back for getting into pickles.
Love that!
Rory
Rory winced slightly at the list Leo had rattled off. He’d used just about every one of those things. And the memories that accompanied the usage were bad. Very bad.
“Looks like we’ve got most of this. Ready for a blowtorch?” Leo asked…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
“Ah! Many thanks. You didn’t cut yourself, did you?”
Rory looked down at his gloved hands and shrugged. Leo carefully picked up the shard. It slipped in place, filling the largest gap.
Maybe he wouldn’t need aluminum alloy after all. Which was good. He’d have had to leave Rory here guarding their work to go find some, and…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, Hugo ran back to our group
@everyone
I want to update Marcel/Mateo/Celarent in a bit, but I am at a Southeast-wide presbytery meeting, and right now, my only purpose in life is to refill food and water pitchers for everybody. It’s worth it. XD But due to my responsibilities, please wait for me to proceed.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Rory
Rory’s eyebrows went up. “You build bombs?”
He dropped to his knees beside Leo and instantly recoiled with a stifled gasp of pain. He quickly shifted to a sitting position, absently rubbing his injured knee. Something sharp pricked his other hand and he held up a thin shard. “I found another.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
“Eh, maybe.” He looked up, eyebrows bunching together. “Except the plan is to get everything to fit perfectly together. So, maybe.”
He settled another piece in place. One tile was coming together quite nicely.
“I’d think of it more like fitting a bomb shell with it’s cordinants. All the bits have to be just so, or your…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah. Plus, Martha would be more comfortable if she wasn’t alone with a bunch of guys. It would be better if Eric was awake, but since he’s not, she’s glad Sara is there.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Rory
Rory stared at him. “Is it kind of like tactics? You know, attack plans. The officers organize all the troops so that they can effortlessly wipe out the target.” He paused and chewed on his lower lip. “Maybe not…”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
“Good question.” He sat back on his heels and reached for another broken piece. “I think it’s some sort of game, or at least that’s what a friend of mine said. You have a picture that’s been cut up into a lot of pieces, and you have to put the pieces together to see the full picture. Or something like that.”
He rearranged…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
You could read his story if you wanted. You never replied after the last chapter I sent.
But you might not like it.Rory
Rory blinked at the shattered pieces. “Jigsaw puzzle?”
He clenched and unclenched his gloved hands. He was still getting over the water incident. Leo acted like it was all normal, but Rory had never seen anything…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ooooh, you’re cruel. Tossing that out there like that after I’ve already fallen for this character and everything. *Turns my glare on you*
XD
Leo
The two tiles had broken up, pieces scattered across the hallway. Leo knelt to pick up a piece. It’s edge was rough, sharp enough to cut skin. Porcelain then. Although it had been…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh gracious. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ah yes! I would love to see his tactics! Rory is going to pick up so many bad, (possibly useful) habits.
Yeah… well he’s still been through worse. Maybe not physically at this point in his life, but he’s in a far better situation than he was, busted up or not. And as for later…….. this is gentle compared. -
Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oooof…no…*glared at Wyoh*
I’ll probably zip them off somewhere to *ahem* illustrate Leoron’s interesting fixing methods.
Rory is not fine, he has broken ribs and a cracked knee, and no you don’t build immunity to broken bones. XD -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 5 months ago
Then write it!!!!!
WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!
And I won’t stop chanting until you send me a section.
Must read!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
No! Really? I RPed weeks ago. Does that mean….. KP ATE MY POST!!!! *sobbing brokenly*
sure, whatever works for you!
Well, someone had better stop Mateo, and I really don’t want Leo to die.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 5 months ago
Well…
Since you’re helping out with the Susan story, you saw how I typically plot, and um…I’m almost done with his plot diagram…so now actual scene writing is supposed to start…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh yes. The Button. XD
(I think It’s your turn? But I can go ahead and just scoot them off to some new assignment if you want.)
Or….. I could call the agents back and have them deal with him…….
or you could bring in a rebel captain to look over the place. Say they’ve driven the agents out of the school for a time.
am totall…[Read more] - Load More
