Andrew

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry, ment to tag @whalekeeper in that last one

@highscribeofaetherium

Well excuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSE me, princes!

@highscribeofaetherium

Did I make you change your profile picture?

Alan Becker is such a good YouTube channel. Me and my one sister are currently obsessed with it, wondering why we are so attached to stick figures. Alan is an excellent storyteller and does a great job of showing instead of telling.

Favourite stick figure? (I have to go with Red)

@keilah-h

Nice dragon! Did you model that?

@linus-smallprint

Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣

@linus-smallprint

I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!

The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.

Bruuuhhh

@ellette-giselle ahhh ok

@rae

I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]

@keilah-h

I was mostly joking.

I know, but my questions came from my own head. XD

@ellette-giselle Not sure why you’re so horrified, they’re literally the exact same questions you asked……..

I can confirm, Linus is not an AI, cause if he were, it’d be hard for him to come up with several fantasy races AND keep it consistent throughout. I’ve messed around with generative AI before (although I never use it to write for…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Dude. Ai has been asking me these questions!

*stares in horror*

😂

Of course let me know. I’d love to help with the third book! Just let me know. Maybe while you’re on your online break you can draw a bunch of illustrations! *hint hint* 🙃

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad you liked it, and to here it is better that the last one in your opinion is encoraging.

Yeah, reading the outline kind of takes those surprises away, doesn’t it?

Sara probably felt underdeveloped because I just kind of threw her in there, so I haven’t spent the time to figure her out yet.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thank you! I know, I was thinking the same thing when I looked it over again. 😂

Glad it feels realistic. I kept breaking his character here in the other drafts, so I’m really working on taking it more slowly. (Even if it makes me want to shake some sense into him!)

First, how would they get Jonathan back into the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 
~FEEDBACK~
The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

@rae

I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)

For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)

Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)

Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)

And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)

Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]

Thunder has a new tail! I didn’t make the model, but I colored the tail.

@rae Do you have any pictures of them?

@linus-smallprint I see you’re an Alan Becker fan!! My brother loves watching those. They’re so cool.

@whalekeeper

Hero forge is a cool tool! It’s not that hard to make a detailed miniature of it.

You have inspired me to share the random doodles I did with my brother on a smaller piece of paper. I’ll let you guess who did what.

Also, I feel honoured to loose The Game with you.