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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m reading about charries and Vikings!
Lol
YES! 100%
Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.
All I can say without giving anything away is…Leon, you…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.
The one you shared is fine. I could see this ending up on one of my playlists. It does have emotion. I just feel like it was a bit on the dramatic side and some of the notes were a little too sharp for this scene. I asked my sister for her thoughts since she doesn’t have a load of Chrono Trigger…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
One question though, how far is this in the book? Are we nearing the end, or does Alan still have some character development to do (maybe sharing this great news with his friends….?)
We are looking at about 7-10 more chapters plus an epilogue. There is one more piece of Alan’s character I still want to develop in this book. This may b…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin
Ellis — (Edge of the Deepwild)
Ellis was forced activate his sword in order to get through a particularly thick clump of brambles. Soulmight sliced through the bushes with satisfying efficiency, leaving the ends of the branches sizzling quietly. After a minute or so, he suddenly stumbled out of the trees.
He…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Hello!
Book 2 time, I see. Well let’s get started on it.
Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us. Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be strong for him while dealing with her struggles.
So for this book, are you going…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
How many people are in that group? Three?
Maybe I’ll have Ellis meet that group, and Ilahna can find her way into the city and meet @highscribeofaetherium‘s character?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Rina —– (Everstrand, outskirts)
Rina instinctively made a portal as something came flying towards her face. An arrow shot out of a second portal behind her and embedded itself in the ground, quivering ominously. There was someone who appeared to be a city guard shooting arrows at two people who were somehow on the side of a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Phew! Done. So, it looks like the only characters that have not met up with anyone yet are Ellis, Ilahna, Klethen, Marcellus, and Everett (who hasn’t been added at all yet.) My two are in the forest, and seem to be the only ones, so they may just meet up with each other.
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RAE's profile was updated 3 weeks, 3 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I think Baron needs French Toast…it would certainly improve his mood XD
Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.
Frustrating charrie.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
10 pages!!!!!!
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian at the Everstrand edge
Brutus’s eyes met Leon’s as if he were going to make some kind of firy remark, but he turned his gaze away. “Hesitation can mean death. Learn that and quick.” He pulled a dagger off of one of the guards, turning it so that it reflected his…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I mean, that’s a good thing, but then on the other hand, I now have to read four pages. : |
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
My goodness! Where did these four pages come from?!?
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Baron (Brutus) with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge.
“I don’t…” Brutus stopped. No, no they did not need to hear the rest of that sentence, it would lead to questions. Brutus gave a short nod, cautiously backing away until he reached the unconscious city guards. By these he knelt, studying their…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.
Sorry about that.
His name is not Brutus, it is in fact Baron. But he uses the name Brutus for…reasons.
@elette @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—With Ben Gunn,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m just gonna run with it.
Baron—with Ben, Flare, Julian, and Leon, Everstrand edge
Baron knocked Julian and Leon back with a gust of strong wind. He winced as he got up, before sending another gust of wind to bash some city guards against the wall of a building, knocking them out.
“Ben Gunn? Which supervisor are…[Read more]
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