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Gabriel Mai
Gabriel’s eyes cracked open a few hours later, still hazy with exhaustion. He let out a small sigh, then went silent a second, before sitting up as if in alarm, untangling his fingers from the ribbon, and drawing his blades, red veins going up the blade. He scanned the fog around him, then shook his head. The voices in his head were interrupting his hearing, but he thought he heard that clicking again, the same clicking that had last time heralded a monster. He didn’t like the idea, hoping his hearing was off, or at least that it wouldn’t bother them. He turned to Huntress, and asked in a whisper, his voice betraying he was still tired.
“Do you hear a clicking sound?”
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)Gabriel Mai
He was relieved when Huntress volunteered.
“Wake me up in a few hours if I’m not up already,” He told her, before settling near the fire, using the crook of his arm as a pillow. He loosened his mask, before fully taking it off, realizing there was no point hiding his face when they had seen it already. He intertwined the red ribbon with his fingers, then fell asleep. The petal birthmarks on his jaw were clearly visible against his pale skin.
We can skip forward now, or we can have Huntress thoughts then skip.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)??? 100%
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel looked up. He felt tired, tempted to lie down on the spot and go to sleep. He looked over to where the water surface barely glistened in the fog.
“I saw you struggling earlier with something in the water, and even with the raft, I don’t trust crossing in the fog at night.” He stood, wobbly on his feet at first, hoping they hadn’t noticed. He glanced around him. “We can’t see far right now, making searching basically worthless. So we stay the night, but we should set up watches.” He almost volunteered to go first, since he couldn’t imagine telling another person to do it instead of him, yet he didn’t want to stay up, he wanted sleep. He sat back down, hoping someone else would take charge. He never thought of himself as a leader.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)Thank you for responding! That all makes sense, but could you please ask someone to put that in the Community Guidelines? Cool for Justice that he did all that himself, but I’d consider it very important that the Community Guidelines are clear and concise.
I would never have made this post if all that was in the Community Guidelines.
Being new is no excuse for not fixing a problem that I would consider easily fixable especially being writers.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)It appears you all really like the Baron art. Tbh, it’s starting to grow on me. I want to do a piece with Gabriel as well, but I have other drawings to do first.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)
Art I did for someone else of their OC as a prize for getting second in an Art Contest I did on Unvale.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)Can you imagine if he has a daughter? Lol, she’d be so spoiled just because he wouldn’t be able to resist her. I have considered giving him an adopted daughter in his story…I kinda want to do it now just for the chaos lol.
I know, I’m late. Apology pic from Pinterest:
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel softly smiled under his mask, even though inside his heart was clenched in a fist.
“I wish I had siblings. I wish I had more friends I could trust. Instead everyday I would go out and sacrifice sleep and health to protect people who would kill me if they saw my Devil Marks.” Gabriel looked at the splotchy skin on his hands, tired. “Sometimes I don’t even know why I do it anymore. With Lucy, I have more than thrill to keep me going. For once I can care, and let her see me as I am. I know eventually we’ll have to part, her to her real home, and I back to my cursed world, but for a moment, this feels like heaven among all the fog.”
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)I did end up finishing it.
I love the concept and layout. I changed his eyes, and now I can kinda see him. The coloring is amateur though, I have pieces where I did much better.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)fun fact: Sniper also has a brother, or well a half brother, but he hasn’t met him yet. He’s another oc of mine with his own interesting story.
OOOOoooooOOOOOoooo
Whatever the color of intrigued is, that is what I am right now.
Gabriel
“Yeah…I didn’t play with other children often either. I’ve spent most my life alone, and it’ll be that way again all to soon. That’s one reason why I cherish Lucy so much. I think if I had a little sibling, I’d feel the same way about them as I do about her. I think she’s rash and foolish at times, pfft, she almost got herself killed trying to keep me from getting wounded, but at the same time, I think she’s the most precious thing in my life. I’d do anything for her. Is that…how you feel about your brother?”
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)I wasn’t sure how to continue so I was like “you know what? I’m gonna ask for a lore dump and see which one of the trio responds XD”. This is getting gooooood.
Gabriel
“No, not really. I know a man who would help me if he could, but he’s too old to go far past the garden now. Everyone else in my village would sooner kill me than help me if they saw under my mask. I…I guess you could say I save them everyday.” He paused, then suddenly leaned forward like a curious child. “You said you have a twin, what is having a sibling like?”
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)I typed in “cute lizard drawing” on Pinterest and that came up lol
Gabriel
Gabriel stomach growled at him loudly before he could refuse. He hadn’t eaten since he was at the amphitheater with Lucy.
“Thank you.” He took the fish, the voices in his head quieting. “How…do you all know each other? You seem to close to have met in this labyrinth.”
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)I’m not sure if I should finish this. I’ve been playing with slightly different styles because I honestly don’t like “mine”. This was supposed to be Baron, but it doesn’t look like him. I could make it someone else.
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)I figured Soldier would enjoy the duck thing.
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, then fell silent. His skin was still splotchy, and his movements when he drew his blades earlier was less fluid than normal. He stared at the pond’s surface as mist rose up, the fog rolling towards them as evening started to settle. Had it only been three days in the labyrinth? Or four? He couldn’t remember. His mind felt disoriented, the task of finding Lucy in an ever-changing maze that they didn’t know the limits of,\ felt incredibly impossible. He was thankful that Lucy at least had her hatchet, but Gabriel knew that if she couldn’t defeat most the monsters of this place. Barnes possibly, but Lucy was not Barnes. Maybe they were the same person, somehow, but Gabriel could never think of them as one. Barnes a woman who shut out the world from her personal self, Lucy was Gabriel’s little charge who usually had so much life…yet the look in her eyes when she wanted to be left alone haunted Gabriel. He hated it.
He noticed Sniper had lit a fire, suddenly coming back to the world a bit out of his thoughts. He sat at the edge of the firelight, before his mind wandered off again. The voices grew louder in his head, the evening darkening, the fog pressing in on the fire, as if it wanted to squeeze out the little bit of life and warmth. Gabriel shivered, then realized one of his companions had been calling his name multiple times.
“Huh?”
Confuzzled, RAE
(PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)
